Talk:Maggy Hurchalla

Latest comment: 4 years ago by HaEr48
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by HaEr48 (talk) 12:53, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Created by Enwebb (talk). Self-nominated at 15:36, 12 September 2019 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: No - I think you should combine your two ALT's.
    • ALT2:... that 78-year-old Maggy Hurchalla was ordered to pay $4 million for interfering with a mining company in Florida, which led to the seizure of her kayaks and car?
QPQ: Done.

Overall: epicgenius (talk) 00:48, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply

Epicgenius, looks like that exceeds the character count. How about Alt3...that after 78-year-old Maggy Hurchalla was ordered to pay $4 million for interfering with a mining company her kayaks were seized? Enwebb (talk) 03:08, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Enwebb: that's strange, ALT2 should only be 164 characters. Maximum is 200 chars, and recommended limit is 180 chars. I also think ALT3 could do with some punctuation, namely
...that after 78-year-old Maggy Hurchalla was ordered to pay $4 million for interfering with a mining company, her kayaks were seized? epicgenius (talk) 03:13, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
Epicgenius, ah, my bad, off the top of my head I remembered the limit as 150. I'm fine with your suggestion or the revised Alt3 now. Thanks, Enwebb (talk) 03:23, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Enwebb: Looks good to go now. I think ALT2 and ALT3 are best. epicgenius (talk) 03:29, 18 September 2019 (UTC)Reply