Talk:Lizzy Rose

Improving Lizzy Rose wikipedia page

Discussion group for improving the Wikipedia page on Lizzy Rose Chopschopschops (talk) 16:50, 10 March 2023 (UTC)

I saw your post at WT:KENT. I've marked where citations are needed. The draft article would benefit from an infobox ({{Infobox person}}). A major problem is that many of the references that do exist are not independent of the subject. At the moment, the draft article is unlikey to be promoted. Mjroots (talk) 04:57, 17 March 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your comments Mjroots - I've made some changes based on your feedback - would you have time to take a look again at this now and see if you think if this has been addressed now? Chopschopschops (talk) 15:31, 18 March 2023 (UTC)

@Chopschopschops: - good to see the lizzyrose.co.uk references have been reduced. There are still four of them though. If they can be replaced with independent references and an infobox added, there is a fair chance of promotion. Mjroots (talk) 05:19, 19 March 2023 (UTC)

Thank you! I've resolved all those issues, thank you for your help, it's really appreciated :) might you happen to know what I should do next? Do I just wait?. Chopschopschops (talk) 09:58, 19 March 2023 (UTC)

Hello, I'm resolved all the comments on this page - can the comments be resolved and put forward for submission? Chopschopschops (talk) 20:44, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Removing external links - resolved - request to remove comment

hi you made a comment on 'Lizzy Rose': draft's "Comment: WP:External links need to be removed. Greenman (talk) 21:13, 21 March 2023 (UTC)" - thank you for your comment, I've now removed those links. Are you content to approve the page for publication? Chopschopschops (talk) 10:57, 26 March 2023 (UTC)

OK, you've worked on the article and it is much improved. I'm going to give it a thorough check, and if it passes will move to mainspace. Mjroots (talk) 09:45, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

thank you SO much Mjroots - the exhibit opens this Friday so that would be just brilliant. thank you thank you thank you :) Chopschopschops (talk) 09:46, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

It's not yet ready, I'm afraid. One of your refs has an incorrect url (noted as a comment on draft). At least one reference is needed per paragraph. A few paragraphs are missing refs. These paragraphs may be verified by the next reference in use, but this needs to be cited every time. See HELP:REFBEGIN for how to use a reference multiple times. Mjroots (talk) 10:21, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

thank you again - those have been fixed, I think? Chopschopschops (talk) 11:13, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

Hi Mjroots - all those changes have now been made, do you think someone could make this page live? Thank you! Chopschopschops (talk) 10:16, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

All changes requested now made - resolved

all changes requested have now been made. Questionable sources have been removed and corrected. Chopschopschops (talk) 10:15, 25 June 2023 (UTC)