Talk:Kingdom Hearts HD 2.5 Remix
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Australia release edit
Released today in Victoria, Australia. Can anyone verify if it's country-wide? - 101.173.42.142 (talk) 08:40, 3 December 2014 (UTC)
Lede edit
Lede needs to be rewritten to be more readable. Right now it reads like a series of game titles and it's easy to get lost mid-sentence. Ping me if you'd like more feedback. czar 00:14, 30 November 2016 (UTC)
- @Czar: not totally sure how to change it, or what to cut...Judgesurreal777 (talk) 01:43, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
- Rewrote the first paragraph as an example of natural language. If you compare the two, the new version should be much easier to read. The lede should also summarize the article and give the gist of the games for someone who knows nothing about HD 2.5 Remix apart from its name.
czar 01:59, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah I see it now, it is better. Clearer, less cluttered. Thanks @Czar:! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 02:29, 7 December 2016 (UTC)
- Rewrote the first paragraph as an example of natural language. If you compare the two, the new version should be much easier to read. The lede should also summarize the article and give the gist of the games for someone who knows nothing about HD 2.5 Remix apart from its name.
GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 17:08, 8 December 2016 (UTC)
Hi, I think this looks ready to become GA but it has few issues that kinda bother me:
- The first two introductory paragraphs say the same but it lacks a clarification. I know what's a Final Mix, but I doubt the common user does it.
- In every section, try to put each game's premise like in Final Fantasy X/X-2 HD Remaster. No sources are required that though
- Lastly, you could divide the reception section into each game like "II Final Mix was well received due to". Avoid using too many quotes. Also, I haven't played these HD games but I heard news that they suffer from long load times. Do the reviewers mention it?
Anyway, just touch those issues and I'll pass it. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 17:08, 8 December 2016 (UTC)
- Ok @Tintor2:, put plot in each section, tried to trim stuff from the intro and add a footnote about final mixes, rewrote most of the reception section to keep only one or two quotes and cut all the scores to keep them just in the box. Also expanded the details of what was said about each game, and I did see something about load time... IGN says it's faster! :) Let me know if you see anything else to fix. Judgesurreal777 (talk) 04:36, 9 December 2016 (UTC)
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Open World? edit
Would this be considered an open world game? It includes Birth by Sleep, which is an open world game according to this: https://www.psu.com/reviews/kingdom-hearts-birth-by-sleep-review/Dohvahkiin (talk) 22:04, 31 October 2020 (UTC)