Talk:Kid Williams

Attention

This article desperately needs attention! Adamd1008 (talk) 20:50, 20 January 2008 (UTC)

Assessment

This is very close to a B-class article, but there are a few minor things that keep me from rating it as such:

• This comment: "All information in this section is derived from BoxRec,[26] unless otherwise stated" seems more than a bit awkward. Better, in my opinion, would be to include specific references where appropriate.
• The biography section phrased a few things awkwardly. For example, the passive-voice, "three more children were born", which should be active-voice and should probably state the relationship.
• "Not many years ago" appears outside a quote, I think. That's not completely clear, since there is a missing double-quote mark. I would prefer either put it into a direct quote or replace "ago" with something more specific.

There are probably other, similar things, which I'm not going to spend too much time going back to find.

Overall, a very good article. Radzy0 (talk) 01:55, 20 June 2023 (UTC)