Talk:Kadenze

Latest comment: 7 years ago by New Joesey in topic Edit Suggestions

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Staying off the page since I work for the company; I just saw some typos: New Joesey (talk) 19:23, 20 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

  • Platform and technology, first sentence: says "Kadenza Inc." (typo) when it should just say "Kadenze"—the company itself wasn't created through these programming approaches.
  • History, third paragraph: says "coursers" instead of "courses" in the first sentence. Also, "Additionally, Kadenze has established industrial partnerships with 8 industrial for profit partners" is redundant, and I think it's always spelled "for-profit." Article might need a few "for-profit" edits since it's mentioned repeatedly. Last sentence is highly speculative (to my knowledge no one has requested this info), although 80% of this article is highly speculative so who am I to complain.
  • History, fourth paragraph: "Management System" shouldn't be capitalized, or alternatively "learning" should be (the first option seems better). This should probably also link to the learning management system page.

Also, if it serves the public interest, I can provide more third-party online references here or drop them into the article. This article definitely needs some verifying. New Joesey (talk) 19:23, 20 May 2016 (UTC)Reply