Talk:Jean, Baron de Batz

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Lorzu in topic May 2010

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Needs somebody competent at French to pull this from the French page. Tar7arus (talk) 18:50, 7 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

UPDATE: One speedy-deletion tag later, I've pulled, raw and tender, from the french WP page. It now needs wikifying and translating better than a robot can. Tar7arus (talk) 19:04, 7 February 2008 (UTC)Reply

May 2010

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I was unable to complete the copy edit. The information gives no background or context, and is confusing and etc. I have marked the confusing part with the appropriate tag. Diannaa TALK 18:12, 28 May 2010 (UTC)Reply

Arriving here also to take a look at what needs copyediting. It's quite confusing without knowledge of the person. I'm going to also add an expert tag. — e. ripley\talk 16:51, 9 July 2010 (UTC)Reply
I have tried as much as possible to copyedit the article. Most of it is OK now except for a couple of sentences that do not make any sense. I have marked this in the article (hidden text). - S Masters (talk) 02:59, 10 July 2010 (UTC)Reply

The article needs a complete re-write, as it is still confusingly worded and offers little in the way of useful or even sensical information. There is almost nothing on Batz's life related in this article. Lorzu (talk) 17:56, 3 February 2012 (UTC)Reply