Talk:Hurricane Lidia (1993)

Latest comment: 12 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review
Good articleHurricane Lidia (1993) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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October 25, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review edit

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 19:41, 24 October 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • "damage totaled to $8 million (1993 USD) was reported." - Why isn't that damage figure on the infobox?
  • "threaten the Baja California Peninsula[6] At 1200 UTC September 21, Hurricane Lidia" - There is no period at the end of that sentence (before reference #6)
  • "Heading towards mainland Mexico[1] the hurricane weakened" - you should probably add a comma before reference #1
  • "in which Lida only a mid-level Category 2 hurricane." - Typo
  • No, its a typo because Lidia is misspelled.--12george1 (talk) 00:11, 25 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • "was issued for areas below La Pza." - another typo
  • "In addition, one injury were reported." - Grammar error; switch to: "In addition, one injury was reported."
  • In the references, at least add Guiney's first name, which would become John Guiney. [1]
  • In reference #2: "Pasch, Robert;" - "Robert Pasch"? You mean "Richard Pasch"?
  • In reference #6, a similar problem occurs; "Lawrence, Max" -> "Lawrence, Miles"
  • In reference #11: "Pash, Richard J." - typo
  • Switch "David Roth" to "Roth, David" in reference #14 to remain consistent with other references.