Talk:Hello Lighthouse

Hello Lighthouse has been listed as one of the Language and literature good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: March 12, 2019. (Reviewed version).

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Latest comment: 5 years ago4 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 02:58, 26 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

I'll look at this one too. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 02:58, 26 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

"It was well received, winning the 2019 Caldecott Medal and tells the story of a lighthouse and its last keeper." The plot of the book should be mentioned before its reception.

Done

NYT link does not work.

URL got in there twice. Bizarre.

Done

"While writing the story it was important for Blackall to focus not only on the heroic deeds of the keepers but also the ways their wives were "equally brave."" Comma needed before "but".

Done

"Blackall also drew inspiration from two of her favorite books Ox-Cart Man and The Little House which also depict the passage of time." Commas after "books" and "House".

Done

"aftermath of the 2016 election" Which one?

Done

Dates and access dates need to be in a consistent format.

They should all be in YYYY-MM-DD now.

I looked the book's ISBN up on Google, and it said the book has 48 pages. Maybe that could be added.

Done

The lead could be expanded slightly more to include background and illustrations.

Done

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:17, 12 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

@Nova Crystallis: Thanks for the review. Changes noted above. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 03:14, 12 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

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