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I'll do this one as well. Courcelles (talk) 17:50, 26 October 2018 (UTC)Reply
"professional debutdebut" - Fixed
Link or explain "non-league" in the lead. - Linked
"chronic tendonitis in his achilles and he eventually ruptured the muscle" Could use some wikilinks for context, and as the Achilles is a tendon, which muscle are you referring to here? - Added link and reworded
"fitness, struggled to break" fitness, he struggled. - Fixed
"afterwas" is not a word - Fixed
Could use a link to explain "He was booked" or clarify that means a yellow card. - Linked
Phrases like "added time" and "extra time" could likely link somewhere too... people might not be aware those are different things. - Linked
"Overall, he scored 5 goals in 34 league matches during the season as Bournemouth finished in eleventh place" Don't use two number formats in one sentence. - Fixed
"for the penultimate game" Should that "for" be "in" instead? - Done
" he was ruled out until October" Any idea why? Source only states it was an injury so I've included that
"the result came only 1 week after fellow south coast club Southampton had beaten Sunderland 8–0." What's the relevance of this? - Removed
"teammate- describing" I think this should be an unspaced emdash or a spaced endash, certainly not a unspaced then spaced hyphen. - Done
"PFA Player of the Month" What is the PFA? - Done
"This was the first time Bournemouth had been promoted into England's top flight in the club's 125-year history." No citation for this? - Done
"to rest first several weeks" to rest for the first? - Done
"1– defeat" It's obvious that has to be a 0, but it's missing. - Done
"2– victory" Missing the other score again. - Done
"he "real strength" Do we need a "had" here? - Done
" action to early." Too. - Done
"thethe season" - Done
We're about a third through the season now, aren't we? What's he done for Cardiff?
I've marginally expanded the section but there hasn't been too much of note really yet, no goals, no assists, no controversial incidents to speak of.
"under15" could use the hyphen like the rest" - Done
"He made his full international debut against the Netherlands in a 1–1 draw in Dublin on 27 May 2016, in which he was awarded man of the match. " Citation? - Done
Any info on why (and how he's eligible) to play for the ROI?
He's eligible through his grandparents, mentioned at the end of the first sentence of the section.
