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AFFONDAMENTO DEL SOMMERGIBILE BRITANNICO SAHIB
Uscì da Algeri il 16 aprile 1943 per operare a nord dello Stretto di Messina. Il giorno 22 il "Sahib" (tenente di vascello John Henry Bromage) attaccò col cannone il rimorchiatore italiano "Valente" (ex francese "Michel Venture") che, con una bettolina a rimorchio, si trovava a 5 miglia a sud di Capo Vaticano. Due giorni più tardi, alle 06.00 del 24 aprile, il sommergibile lanciò i siluri contro un convoglio italiano al largo di Punta Milazzo affondando l’unico piroscafo, il "Galiola", che era scortato dalle torpediniere "Climene" e "Angelo Bassini" e dalle corvette "Gabbiano" e "Euterpe". Il "Bassini" andò subito in soccorso del piroscafo, che colpito da un siluro a dritta affondò in cinque minuti, e ne recuperò i naufraghi. Al momento dell’attacco del "Sahib", la corvetta "Gabbian"o, avendo visto un siluro passargli vicino, risalì la scia dell’arma seguita dall’"Euterpe". Alle 06.27 il "Gabbiano" (tenente di vascello Nilo Foresi) prese un chiaro contatto con l’ecogoniometro e sei minuti più tardi cominciò a lanciare bombe di profondità. In totale ne sganciò ventuno, che procurarono danni al sommergibile. Anche due aerei di scorta tedeschi Ju 88, appartenenti al 2° Gruppo del 1° Stormo Sperimentale (II./L.G.1), attaccarono il "Sahib" sganciando due bombe che scoppiarono alla superficie del mare. Subito dopo, alle 06.37, l’"Euterpe" (capitano di corvetta Antonio March) prendeva contatto e lanciava in cinque salve trenta bombe di profondità. Esse risultarono fatali al sommergibile che, gravemente danneggiato, emergeva fortemente appoppato. Le due corvette, imitate dai due aerei, aprirono il fuoco con i cannoni e le mitragliere, e il "Sahib", dopo un tentativo di difesa subito dissuaso dal tiro intimidatorio delle unità italiane, fu abbandonato. Alle 06.59 affondava rapidamente di poppa in lat. 38°20’N, long. 15°11’E. Le unità italiane recuperarono quarantasei uomini del sommergibile sui quarantasette che componevano l’equipaggio. Si salvarono anche il comandante Bromate e cinque suoi ufficiali. Tuttavia, uno dei superstiti, che era ferito, decedette il 3 maggio.
Francesco MATTESINI
Roma, 5 ottobre 2013
Fonte; "Cronologia delle perdite subite in Mediterraneo dalle Marine delle nazioni Alleate durante la Seconda Guerra Mondiale", Parte prima (prosecuzione): "Unità operanti sotto il controllo britannico", SOMMERGIBILI, Bollettino d'Archiviodell'Ufficio Storico della Marina Militarem Roma, dicembre 2001. Revisionato dall'Autore. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 93.45.224.138 (talk) 05:27, 5 October 2012 (UTC)
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GA Review edit
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 14:05, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
Giving a look. —Ed!(talk) 14:05, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written:
- Pass External links, dup links and dab links look good. Copyvio detector returns green.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable:
- It is broad in its coverage:
- Not Yet
- The infobox data on ship speed is inconsistent with the speed data in the prose.
- Prose also mentions mines, if they could be added to armament in the infobox.
- Her namesake should be mentioned.
- The "Malta" section needs to be expanded with the aftermath of the sinking of the Scillin and its aftermath, as it's an incident that will likely drive a lot of non-Naval historian traffic to the article. That page has some details for a start, but talk about the inquiry of the captain and the subsequent secrecy of the event.
- Sure, but the content on SS Scillin is sourced to a BBC blog and this, which I consider unreliable. A google books search was not turned up anything else than a book about retirement, which mentioned Scillin. L293D (☎ • ✎) 19:22, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- "Algiers" section: Since Finale, Italy doesn't have a link, is there somewhere close to it that can be linked?
- Any other commanders than the one listed when the ship was launched?
- Last patrol: What was the effect of the depth charges? What on the ship was damaged to cause it to be forced to surface?
- How many of the crew returned home after the war?
- Where's the wreck? Has it been located?
- Not Yet
- It follows the neutral point of view policy:
- Pass No problems there, though per above more diversity of referencing needed.
- It is stable:
- Pass No problems there.
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
- Pass Images tagged PD as appropriate.
- Other:
OK, so all of the additions are bringing it in line with the GA criteria, I'm thinking. Going to Pass at this point. Thanks for your responsiveness! —Ed!(talk) 00:39, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
Citation style edit
As I drove by I noticed that the long footnotes were templated and had "Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFAkermann2002." etc so changed the inline cites to sfn's. Being at work I couldn't check my book sources to avoid interweb sources or long footnote them to be compatible with sfns and left it as a work in progress. I should have asked here first but I've got used to re-writing derelict articles and didn't bother, for which I owe the other editors an apology. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 12:02, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- My view is that the sfn template gives the best short footnote result for the reader. I am puzzled that Sturmvogel 66 states that their priority is for readability and yet does not like the sfn template. Perhaps I have misunderstood. All reference methods have their pros and cons, but I find the simple short footnotes particularly irritating as you have to hop about the article to work out which reference is being used (especially if one author has published several of the refs). The "hover to see full ref" capability of the sfn template avoids this problem. It also keeps the page numbers or other location identifiers out of the text, which can be important if several pages need to be listed to cover the content of a short paragraph. The sfn template is more work for the editor if adding new references, but that is not a reader-focussed consideration. (But explains why it is not my first choice method as an editor.) ThoughtIdRetired (talk) 14:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- I think we get attached to a style; I find some of them incomprehensible. Style harvnb seems to me to be elaboration for its own sake but each to his own. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 16:05, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- I agree. I also agree with Retired that sfn's are more work for the editor, which is my primary consideration.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:28, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- I think we get attached to a style; I find some of them incomprehensible. Style harvnb seems to me to be elaboration for its own sake but each to his own. Regards Keith-264 (talk) 16:05, 13 October 2022 (UTC)