Talk:Get Back (ASAP)

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Magiciandude in topic GA Review
Good articleGet Back (ASAP) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starGet Back (ASAP) is part of the Saxobeats series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 29, 2017Good article nomineeListed
July 28, 2017Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 16:54, 14 June 2017 (UTC)Reply


  Doing... Alright, I'll take a look. Expect a review within a few days. Erick (talk) 16:54, 14 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

Lead
  • "The track was written and produced by Marcel Prodan and Andrei Nemirschi, and was recorded at their Maan Studio" Where is Maan Studio located?
  • "but also comparing it to its predecessor", "Mr. Saxobeat" (2011)" Positively or negatively? If it's not in a negative way, replace "but" with "while".
Composition and reception
  • Per MOS:DECADE, it should be written as "1990s", not "90s".
Music videos

"clip was shot by Iulian Moga at Castel Film in Bucharest, Romania, in one single day." Remove "single", "one day" is sufficient.

  • "1 Q Sapro, Marcel Prodan and Andrei Nemirschi have cameo appearances throughout the video." Who is 1 Q Sapro? Unlike the other two, this person is only mentioned once in the article.

More to come... Erick (talk) 23:27, 23 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

@Magiciandude: All done and added until now. Thank you! Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:27, 24 June 2017 (UTC)Reply
@Magiciandude: Any updates? Cartoon network freak (talk) 19:20, 27 June 2017 (UTC)Reply
I'm not finished with the review and life is getting in the way of Wikipedia. Please be wait for a few more days and it should be done. Erick (talk) 19:26, 27 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

Continuing on...

Music video
  • Per WP:PAIC, footnotes should come after an adjacent punctuation such as commas and sentences.
  • " Los 40 Principales cited..." → "A review/editor/music critic (whichever you want to put it) for Los 40 Principales cited..."
Credits and personnel
  • Record studios aren't usually included on the personnel sections so Maan Studios should be removed.

That's about it. I'm sorry about the wait, life has been *way* more busier than usual. Erick (talk) 21:49, 28 June 2017 (UTC)Reply

@Magiciandude: No worries, thank you very much for your review. I've fixed everything you listed here. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:40, 29 June 2017 (UTC)Reply
And with that, the article is now GA status. Good job! Erick (talk) 11:46, 29 June 2017 (UTC)Reply