Talk:Food trucks in South Korea
Latest comment: 1 year ago by Frogsarehere in topic Wording
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Wording edit
A large portion of this article's wording is incredibly confusing and hard to read, it almost seems like it was translated from another language? I think some major rewording is needed throughout the entire article to make it much clearer. The language used in section 6 is particulary confusing and does not follow the correct tone of a Wikipedia article. "Since Myeong-dong is located in Myeong-dong, Myeong-dong has a large number of food trucks" and " It is especially interesting that food trucks sell food that you can enjoy at premium restaurants such as lobsters and steak"? Frogsarehere (talk) 16:02, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
- Upon further inspection it seems like majority of this article was wrote as an assignment by a student at Hanyang University in Korea? I suspect this is a reason why at times the English grammar and wording may be difficult if English was not the first language of the student. This also may be hightened by the fact a lot of references are from the Korean version of the article, which may have been directly translated and resulted in unusual wording. I'll try and re-word the page over the next couple months to try and make it clearer for English readers :) Frogsarehere (talk) 16:13, 4 December 2022 (UTC)