I have just completed the B class checklist for the Mil Hist project and believe that this article could be improved by addressing the following:
- Referencing: almost there, just needs one more - for B class all paragraphs must have at least one in line citation;
- Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss this person's early life, as well as later life (what did he do after being released?)
- Supporting materials: an infobox or a picture would help illustrate the article.
Just a few ideas. Once these have been done, please request another assessment by putting the page name on WP:MHA. Cheers. AustralianRupert (talk) 03:15, 8 April 2009 (UTC)Reply
