Talk:Diana West (lactation consultant)

Latest comment: 13 years ago by WikiDan61 in topic First paragraph
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The books refereed to, now all have spam links to buy them. It would be preferable to list them in a bibliography with ISBN numbers.TeapotgeorgeTalk 08:33, 19 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

On it. - ManicSpider (talk) 01:16, 21 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

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The first paragraph does not make clear who she is and why she has an article. The fact that her grandfather is notable can come later in the article, you don't achieve notability by having a notable grand parent? TeapotgeorgeTalk 13:50, 26 January 2011 (UTC)Reply

Done. WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 14:08, 26 January 2011 (UTC)Reply