Talk:Da la Vuelta

Latest comment: 4 years ago by Kingsif in topic GA Review

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GA Review edit

This review is transcluded from Talk:Da la Vuelta/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 02:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this, comments should be added soon! Kingsif (talk) 02:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Style edit

  • Lead good length for article
  • Well written throughout, with good tone and grammar
  • Pass

Coverage edit

  • Lead comprehensive
  • The background is all about how he came to record an English-language album - the song is in Spanish and, while a promotional single for that album, there is definitely way too much coverage of the entire album process so much that I really thought text had been transplanted from the album article before I got close to the relevance.
  • Music and lyrics is good
  • Reception has good balance of detail and quotes
  • Needs work

Illustration edit

  • A few standard chart lists
  • Album cover in infobox
  • Fair use music clip
  • Pass

Neutrality edit

  • Seems fine
  • Pass

Stability edit

  • History looks clear
  • Pass

Verifiability edit

  • Sources look good
  • Everything cited in line
  • Pass

Copyright edit

  • Check looks good
  • Good rationale for use of song clip
  • Pass Kingsif (talk) 00:34, 8 January 2020 (UTC)Reply

Overall edit

  •   On hold A good portion of the article is the outside coverage of the album's arguments, which can be cut down quite a bit. Kingsif (talk) 23:44, 13 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Magiciandude: I don't think the notifications are being sent to your talkpage, so ping. Kingsif (talk) 23:45, 13 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Kingsif: I'll get to work on this either this Thursday or Friday as I'm off work those two days. Erick (talk) 16:17, 14 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Kingsif: I cut the background information and merged the release information with musical style section. Erick (talk) 20:31, 17 January 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Magiciandude: That's great - I think the mention of being one of the three Spanish-language records included on Marc Anthony is sufficient background, but if some background is also added, that should be fine as long as relevant. Nice.   Kingsif (talk) 22:56, 17 January 2020 (UTC)Reply