Talk:Conductores de Venezuela

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:15, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Kingsif: Very few changes are needed to pass. 7-day hold. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:26, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• Change the semicolon after "Synthesis of the Arts" to a comma; back half is not a complete sentence.
• "Monocooking" isn't an English word. Some of my searches for monococción indicate the correct translation would be single-firing (Single-fire process is a redirect).
• Remove comma after "since its construction".
• Remove comma after "as a painter".

Source spot checks

(Only three given the small number of sources)

• [6] Y BBC Mundo: "...la Universidad Central de Venezuela en Caracas, la universidad pública más importante del país, y donde fue profesor." Also supports the Rivera-related claims.
• [8] Y Cerámica Carabobo site notes the use of single-firing ovens
• [11] Y AP report quotes him as saying “Este mural se adueñó de mi corazón”

Other

• Earwig shows no issues.
• Run IABot. The one from Cerámica Carabobo is dead but archived, so this is needed.
• Images are all freely licensed and Venezuela has FoP.
• Two of the three images need alt text, though "Refer to caption" will suffice. (There is an |alt= parameter in {{Wide image}}.)

• @Sammi Brie: Quicker than I thought, though IABot is down for me so I haven't managed to do that, but can hopefully get to it manually soon. Other points done. Kingsif (talk) 05:48, 4 August 2022 (UTC)

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