Talk:Chunky (Bruno Mars song)

Song not notable as a stand alone article

My edit summary said unsourced but I meant it as not sourced to RS for establishing WP:N as a stand alone article. I reverted to the redirect. ^{Atsme📞📧} 03:44, 7 September 2017 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 07:27, 14 April 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• The song was released → It was released
• Link "radio" to Contemporary hit radio
• and served as the fourth single from 24K Magic → and served as the album's fourth single
• "Chunky" was co-written by Mars, Philip Lawrence → "Chunky" was co-written by Mars alongside Philip Lawrence

It's the same there are four writers, so separated by commas seems better. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:34, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

• under their label → I would rather say "alias"
• is a funk and electro-funk → we don't need "funk" anymore once we got "electro-funk"

Electro funk and funk are different things. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:34, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

• while lyrically it is an anthem to big buttocks → while lyrically acts as an anthem for big buttocks
• Critics noted the resemblance → They noted the resemblance
• Link rhythm and blues
• Link 1980s and 1990s to 1980s in music and 1990s in music, respectively

Seems trivial. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:34, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

• in 2016 and was certified gold → in 2016, as well as was certified gold

The rest was addressed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:34, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

Infobox

• We don't need the "(Australia only)" bit
• See my thoughts of the release date in "Other things"
• Remove the "Formats" parametre alltogether; we're talking about the single now (not the song), and it wasn't released for download or streaming on its own
• Remove "funk" as we've got "electro-funk"
• Link the album's liner notes to the "Length" parametre
• See my thoughts of the label in "Other things"

Production and release

• "Chunky" was co-written by Bruno Mars, Philip Lawrence → "Chunky" was co-written by Bruno Mars alongside Philip Lawrence
• were in charge of programming the drums. Mars, Lawrence → were in charge of programming the drums, while Mars, Lawrence (to avoid clipped sentences)
• serving as mixing engineer → serving as a mixing engineer

 Done, but the first one explained above the reason.

Composition

• We don't need "funk" anymore since we have "electro-funk"; it's kind of double trouble here

Same as previous, please let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:21, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

• "Chunky" is a funk and electro-funk ballad[4][5] featuring synthesizers and drum machines.[6] The single is a mid-tempo track with a "silky pre-chorus" and a basic structure revolving around synthesizers and a "popping" bass → A mid-tempo electro-funk ballad[4][5] with a "silky pre-chorus", "Chunky" features a basic structure revolving around synthesizers, drum machines and "popping" bass.[6][7][8][9]

I shouldn't have this many sources in a row...more than three is not advised. Honestly, doesn't change much. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:21, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

• was composed in common time and in the key of E-flat major with a tempo of 100 beats per minute → was composed in the key of E-flat major with a tempo of 100 beats per minute in common time.
• Link rhythm and blues
• Link 1980s and 1990s to 1980s in music and 1990s in music, respectively

As previously stated. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:21, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

• Andy Kellman writing for AllMusic → Andy Kellman, writing for AllMusic,
• said that the song recalls → said that the song recalled
• and even "Treasure" by Mars → and Mars' own "Treasure" (2013)
• and it is reminiscent of → , and further reminiscence of
• the decade where neo soul began to replace new jack swing → , ... according to [WRITER] from [PUBLISHER]
• an anthem to big buttocks → an anthem regarding big buttocks
• Mars croons on the track → Lyrics include:

 Done Everything but wha I pointed out was adressed.

Critical reception

• There we have a few of connection issues, so I decided to edit the section by myself

Commercial performance

• Upon the release of the 24K Magic album → Upon the release of its parent album 24K Magic
• peaking at 94 and 79 → peaking at numbers 94 and 79
• the song hit 108 → the song hit number 108
• which acts as an extension of the → which acts as an extension to the
• It debuted and peaked → It further debuted and peaked (for flow)
• The song was released to radio in Australia on the week of November 27, 2017. "Chunky" → After its radio release in Australia in November 2017, "Chunky"

 Done

Live performances

• on October 15, 2016, on → second comma not needed
• According to Billboard staff → According to the Billboard staff
• of his third worldwide tour—24K Magic World Tour → of his third worldwide 24K Magic World Tour

 Done

Credits and personnel

• Edited by myself

Charts

• Flawless :)

Certifications

• Edited by myself

Release history

• Unlink here since already mentioned before

 Done

Other things

• 26.5% is a good percentage for copyviolation
• No disambiguation links
• No dead links
• The radio airplay release in Australia isn't entirely supported by the sources given, since the release date isn't clearly specifiec and the label isn't mentioned at all. Unless you find a better source, remove the label from the entire article (use "N/A" in "Release history") and rewrite the release date to just "November 2017"

The date is not, however, it says WMA on the first source, so I won't remove it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:01, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

In the meantime, I found this source 1. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:43, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Outcome

•  On hold Some things to be fixed before GA. Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:38, 17 April 2019 (UTC)
  • @MarioSoulTruthFan: I think everything has been sovled now, thus I'm passing. Is there any chance you could also review one of my GANs? Just disregard if you're too busy. Greets and congrats; Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:18, 21 April 2019 (UTC)

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