Talk:Brian E. Kinsella

Latest comment: 6 months ago by 2603:7000:3141:2BF7:5522:17AE:2DE1:E597 in topic Keep going!

Meritorious Public Service medal Award recipients edit

Hi Everyone,

I have just published an article for review (Current prediction: B-Class), about Brian E. Kinsella, former U.S. Army Captain.

I am covering his life prior to, during, and after service, and am including notable efforts within volunteering to various assignments and initiatives, mostly within the realm of reducing the number of solider suicide in the U.S.

I am also trying to highlight his efforts during the August, 2021 evacuation crisis in Afghanistan.

I am hoping to advance an assessment for approval of my draft, and am meeting CLASS-B requirements, and believe I have well-sourced citations.

If you have time, please post any feedback on what I might do to improve my chances of expediting the very long back-log.

This is hopefully my first attempt of writing biographies I research on people I find worthy of mentioning for their efforts to improve lives for others.

Thank you so much for your time.

Best,

Mwikiforce Mwikiforce (talk) 21:29, 6 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Updated draft edit

Hi everyone,

I’ve updated the draft to address these two bullets I left on there after Johannes’ latest comments:

• Ref 2 is a press release

• Ref 9 doesn't discuss the draft's subject

--Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 15:37, 10 October 2023 (UTC)Reply


Here’s my thoughts on this (Mwikiforce):

Ref 2 the military press release is here to verify Brian E. Kinsella DID receive the medal. No other admissible article refs are available.

Ref 9 - I left in, because it proves that the nonprofit Brian E. Kinsella was the CEO of, did have an initiative called The Black Box.

Happy to remove if not needed. Any feedback is valuable, so thank you in advance for your time.

Best, Mwikiforce (talk) 17:41, 12 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Ref 9 is now ref 12. Mwikiforce (talk) 17:17, 15 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Keep going! edit

Hi @Mwikiforce, thanks for reaching out by email. I'll reply here if that's ok.

I think you're doing a good job here at addressing the reviewers' concerns. Sharing your list of references here on the talk page might be a good idea. Although a couple of the references used previously were problematic, it's worth remembering they are just two references from a bigger list - my opinion is you're doing enough here to demonstrate that the subject is notable enough for inclusion in the encyclopaedia, and the article is well written. I'm not a reviewer though so ultimately it's for them to decide. WaggersTALK 09:59, 24 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

Hi WaggersTALK,
Thank you, thank you, thank you, for taking the time to read my email and respond. I truly appreciate the feedback! It's SO helpful, and uplifting (to keep going!) :-) Great idea about publishing the list of references. I have attached it here.
Best,
Mwikiforce
PUBLISHED ARTICLES
https://www.wsj.com/articles/trapped-in-afghanistan-rescued-by-volunteers-how-a-handful-of-americans-freed-5-000-afghans-11630284116
https://www.nbcnews.com/now/video/nonprofit-uses-a-i-to-help-save-veterans-lives-153582149698
https://finance.yahoo.com/news/ex-goldman-sachs-analyst-help-veterans-by-finding-them-jobs-201055540.html
https://www.businessinsider.com/stop-soldier-suicide-ride-for-life-2012-9
https://www.foxbusiness.com/features/wall-street-military-veterans-team-up-in-a-night-for-life
https://www.mdwhome.mdw.army.mil/docs/default-source/archived-media-advisories/19-16-media-advisory---salute-from-the-chief.pdf?sfvrsn=a6b33b04_2
https://www.delawareonline.com/story/news/2016/09/30/delawareans-push-stop-soldier-suicide/91291344/
http://sunrisedocumentary.com/veterans/
https://www.businessinsider.com/stop-soldier-suicide-night-for-life-intrepid-2013-5
https://alumni.jhu.edu/businessdirectory/rappore
https://www.army.mil/article/36771/fort_knoxs_newest_import_adjusting_to_american_life
https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/bs-xpm-2004-04-21-0404210187-story.html
https://abcnews.go.com/US/commander-motorcycling-us-stop-soldier-suicide/story?id=17329463 :https://pages.jh.edu/news_info/news/home05/may05/elser.html
https://www.businessinsider.com/goldmans-kinsella-stop-soldier-suicide-2014-5
https://medium.com/a-level-capital/announcing-our-investment-in-rappore-55c6ceb8f9bd
https://magazine.krieger.jhu.edu/2020/11/reducing-military-suicides/
https://www.barrons.com/articles/goldman-sachs-investors-more-interested-in-energy-sector-1506608366
https://www.army.mil/article/29189/soldier_helps_in_cub_scouts_advancement
https://www.cbsnews.com/news/americans-in-afghanistan-face-hard-choice-of-dividing-their-families/
https://www.businessinsider.com/military-veterans-now-serving-on-wall-street-2015-11#blackstones-tom-hill-served-alongside-schwarzman-in-the-army-reserves-15
https://youtu.be/PNllhhvJGhM
https://archive.org/details/MSNBCW_20130524_160000_NOW_With_Alex_Wagner/start/3120/end/3180
https://archive.org/details/rth_25103587_1200K
https://archive.org/details/rth_25417913_1200K
https://archive.org/details/rth_26994835_1200K
https://www.cnn.com/2013/09/21/us/22-veteran-suicides-a-day/index.html
https://www.capegazette.com/article/beebe-and-delaware-tech-host-veteran-event-nov-18/192106
https://www.cnbc.com/2015/09/21/it-could-be-a-long-time-before-its-safe-to-buy-oil.html
https://www.marketwatch.com/story/10-ways-to-profit-from-the-coming-rebound-in-oil-prices-2015-07-14
https://seekingalpha.com/news/3329964-goldman-says-energy-selloff-offers-chance-to-build-long-positions
https://www.benzinga.com/analyst-ratings/analyst-color/16/06/8085608/could-anadarkos-debt-be-the-reason-no-m-a-rumors-have-co  
https://www.ibtimes.com/military-suicide-risk-not-linked-deployment-dod-study-says-1866538  
http://www.southmag.com/Features-Blog/181112_Monday-5-Things-with-D-Paul-Graham/
https://money.yahoo.com/video/stop-soldier-suicide-provides-veterans-161055791.html
https://www.thedailybeast.com/hero-project-tv-military-suicide
https://pages.jh.edu/gazette/2005/31may05/31elser.html
https://finance.yahoo.com/news/leading-medical-professionals-launch-rappore-120300049.html
https://www.healthcaretechoutlook.com/news/prominent-medical-professionals-debut-rappore-a-patientcentered-mental-health-platform-nid-2588.html
https://www.baltimoresun.com/news/bs-xpm-2005-05-26-0505260028-story.html
https://nypost.com/2015/05/18/you-dont-need-to-be-a-drill-sergeant-to-run-your-workday-like-one/
https://archive.org/details/FOXNEWSW_20150415_030000_The_OReilly_Factor/start/1800/end/1860
https://www.nbcnews.com/nightly-news/video/searching-for-clues-to-help-save-soldiers-lives-153449029715
https://www.dvidshub.net/image/5307096/brian-kinsella-receives-mpsm
https://archive.org/details/MSNBCW_20130524_160000_NOW_With_Alex_Wagner/start/3000/end/3060?q=brian+kinsella
https://archive.org/details/MSNBCW_20130524_160000_NOW_With_Alex_Wagner/start/3060/end/3120
https://archive.org/details/MSNBCW_20130524_160000_NOW_With_Alex_Wagner/start/3180/end/3240
https://archive.org/details/MSNBCW_20130524_160000_NOW_With_Alex_Wagner/start/3420/end/3480
https://www.scribd.com/book/385162673/The-Wounds-Within-A-Veteran-a-PTSD-Therapist-and-a-Nation-Unprepared
https://patch.com/virginia/arlington-va/calendar/event/20190425/546901/u-s-armys-salute-from-the-chief-twilight-tattoo
https://sanantonioreport.org/usaa-backed-coalition-launches-41-million-fund-to-prevent-veteran-suicide-promote-mental-health/
https://www.einpresswire.com/article/483371037/stop-soldier-suicide-co-founder-receives-meritorious-public-service-medal
https://www.newswire.com/news/roberts-ryan-investments-proudly-welcomes-brian-kinsella-veteran-us-21029696
https://www.elitetraveler.com/travel/travel-news/a-night-for-life-a-fundraising-event-at-the-intrepid-museum
https://www.vetshq.com/2015/05/veterans-news-update-may-29/
https://www.opentohope.com/episode-43-military-related-suicide/
https://thinkpiecepublishing.com/think-piece-news/janet-burroway-appears-new-york-tv-show-open-hope/
https://www.broadwayworld.com/article/Michael-Cerveris-Alice-Ripley-and-More-Join-Tonights-RIGHT-BEFORE-I-GO-Benefit-for-Suicide-Awareness-20171204
https://www.military.com/daily-news/2019/05/26/nonprofits-struggle-reach-risk-veterans-who-shun-va-services.html
https://www.taps.org/audio/2018/suicide-grief
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kG-MQSvCE1I
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RVgzN0fGrx4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dCjd6VWmlCw
https://www.military.com/benefits/veterans-health-care/how-usaas-face-fight-building-coalition-combat-veteran-suicide.html#:~:text=Face%20the%20Fight%20is%20a,rate%20in%20half%20by%202030.
https://www.gsalumninetwork.com/s/news/q-a-with-brian-kinsella-co-founder-and-chairman-of-stop-soldier-suicide-co-found-MC6IEB6I23IBCDFMM4K7Q3DG2QII
https://www.columbiaclub.org/event/philanthropy-paying-it-forward/
https://www.garysguide.com/events/rxm0z69/Is-It-Easy-To-Change-Or-Restart-Careers
https://www.jhunewsletter.com/article/2004/04/police-seek-suspect-in-students-murder-49381
https://www.jhunewsletter.com/article/2005/04/one-year-later-students-remember-elser-20886
https://pages.jh.edu/jhumag/0604web/wholly.html
https://www.goupstate.com/story/news/2004/04/21/students-gather-to-remember-classmate/29715437007/
https://www.cnbc.com/2012/10/12/5000-mile-ride-across-america-to-help-stop-soldier-suicide-comes-to-final-end-point-at-times-square-on-saturday-october-13th.html
http://www.silleycircuits.com/previous-events
https://www.verywellmind.com/how-veterans-are-coping-with-the-taliban-takeover-of-afghanistan-5200438
https://www.nonprofitpro.com/article/p2p-201-speaker-spotlight-brian-kinsella/
https://hopkinssports.com/sports/wrestling/roster/brian-kinsella/11429
https://wilkowmajority.com/show-guests/brian-kinsella/
https://www.healthcaretechoutlook.com/news/prominent-medical-professionals-debut-rappore-a-patientcentered-mental-health-platform-nid-2588.html
https://www.guidestar.org/profile/27-3512119
https://liveeverything.buzzsprout.com/2176631/13470688
https://www.thenewsenterprise.com/news/local/former-soldier-hits-highway-to-battle-military-suicides/article_a0dd61fc-771f-5389-8a28-9d815b622de2.html
https://www.mdwhome.mdw.army.mil/docs/default-source/archived-media-advisories/salute-bios-2019.pdf?sfvrsn=74b23b04_2
https://martinsvillebulletin.com/news/local/veteran-walks-to-raise-money/article_ae228bd2-5ab4-11ed-a89c-a366ae5c894b.html
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Haiti_Relief_DVIDS252758.jpg
https://www.southmag.com/monday-5-things-to-remember/
https://www.capegazette.com/article/beebe-and-delaware-tech-host-veteran-resource-event-nov-18/192106
https://www.ibtimes.com/military-suicide-risk-not-linked-deployment-dod-study-says-1866538
https://nypost.com/2015/05/18/you-dont-need-to-be-a-drill-sergeant-to-run-your-workday-like-one/
https://www.cnn.com/2013/09/21/us/22-veteran-suicides-a-day/index.html Mwikiforce (talk) 13:43, 24 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
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