Talk:Brave Story: New Traveler

Latest comment: 13 years ago by Teancum in topic WP:Video games assessment

WP:Video games assessment

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I'm not a man of many words, so I will try to list things out:

  • Only the Reception section has any sources.
  • There is no Gameplay or Development section at all
  • "Plot Summary" and "Characters" should be restructured. A main heading of Synopsis would work, with Plot and Characters being two subheadings beneath it
  • The detail for each character needs to be trimmed
  • It could use an in-game screenshot

It's a good start for the article, however given the issues I'm assessing this to remain as Start Class. --Teancum (talk) 13:49, 10 August 2010 (UTC)Reply