Talk:Bad Dragon

Latest comment: 2 years ago by AndyTheGrump in topic Neutral Point of View

Neutral Point of View edit

I really don't think this article is Neutral Point of View compared to other articles featuring business in the adult industry, such as Pornhub, XVideos, and XHamster. While the sources given are valid, most of it reads like a giant advertisement rather than something purely factual. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ClosetBurger (talkcontribs) 00:37, 14 September 2020 (UTC)Reply

Agreed. Purely promotional. AndyTheGrump (talk) 04:55, 5 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
I've had a go at cleaning up the language used on the page; thoughts? -- Ineffablebookkeeper (talk) 16:22, 6 June 2021 (UTC)Reply
Better. I've just removed a load of primary-sourced promotional waffle re COVID-19 too, since it amounted to 'we will carry on selling stuff' too.
I think the article would be better if the 'products' section didn't read quite so much like a catalogue, with more third-party commentary, and less citation of third-party sources just so the article can list such objects. That really requires more research though, and quite frankly, I've go better things to do with my time than look for wolf-dildo reviews or whatever. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:33, 6 June 2021 (UTC)Reply