Talk:Akira Shimada

Latest comment: 11 years ago by Ichiro Kikuchi in topic WP:Japan Assessment Commentary

meets the notability standard,

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some editing needed — Preceding unsigned comment added by DGG (talkcontribs) 03:53, 5 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

WP:Japan Assessment Commentary

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The article is assessed Start class. The article has good content, but needs more in-line citations, as several paragraphs lack them. The Anecdotes section is really a "Trivia" section, which goes against current Manual of Style (see Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Trivia sections). The information in the Anecdotes section should be worked into the main text somehow, or into an appropriate sub-heading. The information on the previous governor should likewise be moved up into an appropriate section of the main text, in chronological order, or should be excised and moved to another more relevant article. Good luck. Boneyard90 (talk) 14:50, 5 May 2013 (UTC)Reply

Thank you very much. The Anectodes section was the literal translation of the Japanese Wikipedia, and the information will be dispersed in the main section, as well as the information of the previous governor. --Ichiro Kikuchi (talk) 05:01, 6 May 2013 (UTC)Reply