Talk:ARA Jujuy

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Review: September 1, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

Latest comment: 2 years ago6 comments2 people in discussion

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 09:28, 2 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

I'll take a gander at this one. Comments to follow in due course. Zawed (talk) 09:28, 2 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Lead

...assigned to the fleet upon...: no context for the fleet here.

Construction and career

reserve in 1918–1919....: I originally was going to suggest replacing 'in' with 'from' here, but have since noticed that you use the 'in' phrasing in conjunction with a date range elsewhere. Not sure if that is grammatically correct or not, couldn't find anything on it on a quick skim of the MOS

I think that you're right; during is better grammatically

January – May 1927,...: spacing either side of the dash shouldn't be there.

Other stuff

Image tags look fine.
No dupe links.

Minor nitpicks only, looks close to being ready for GA. Zawed (talk) 03:05, 13 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Hey Sturmvogel 66, a courtesy ping here. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:15, 24 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

Sorry for the delay, all done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:26, 30 August 2022 (UTC)Reply

OK, passing as GA now. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:10, 1 September 2022 (UTC)Reply

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