Talk:2017 FA Community Shield
Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Attribution edit
The introduction and background is based on other Charity/Community Shield articles, such as this one. Lemonade51 (talk) 19:14, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
GA Review edit
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:2017 FA Community Shield/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
Shall review. MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead edit
- Delink McDonald's per MOS:BOLDAVOID
Background edit
- "The FA brought the kick-off time an hour earlier" - brought forward
- Put The Football Association's acryonyms in brackets after the first time it is mentioned
Pre-match edit
- "he noted they had kept the spine of their team" - could you clarify what is meant by this phrase by rewording it to encyclopedic language?
- "Conte confirmed Eden Hazard and Tiémoué Bakayoko were ruled out of the match with injuries and confirmed Victor Moses would play;" - repetition of confirmed
Team selection edit
- "he officially took over responsibilities from John Terry in July." -the responsibility
Summary edit
- The article would be better off if you wrote that the stadium observed a minute's silence for the Grenfell fire victims.
- Not sure what you mean exactly by this. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
- On second thought, disregard as I have just found out the meaning of moment of silence and it is the same as you have written in the article.
- "The defender was taken off and replaced by Kolašinac," - mention the head injuries as you have done in the first image in the sub-section.
- " when he went to ground in the penalty box after a challenge from Héctor Bellerín." - fell to the ground
- "a late challenge by Pedro on resulted in the Chelsea attacker being shown a red card." - this sentence doesn't say who Pedro callenged on the Chelsea side that led to his red card.
Post-match edit
- "describing victory as" - the victory
References edit
- Ref 16 is lacking an author
That is all I found during my read-through. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
- @MWright96:, have made corrections, thanks for the review. Just one issue with the Grenfell fire in the summary, could do with clarifying here. Lemonade51 (talk) 18:11, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Lemonade51: See my above response. Apart from that, this article is now at GA status. MWright96 (talk) 19:00, 26 December 2017 (UTC)