Draft talk:John James (businessman and philanthropist)

Draft talk:John James (businessman and philanthropist) - how to improve

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I am at a loss to understand how to improve this article - can anyone help please?

On my own userpage I have declared what could be a potential conflict of interest in that I am employed as the archivist for the John James Bristol Foundation. I am preparing the contents of this archive for donation to Bristol Archives who are extremely interested in taking this but I am NOT being paid to write a Wikipedia article.

I have tried to write this article as neutrally as possible but any suggestions would be gratefully received.

Thank you in advance Jjarchivist (talk) 10:47, 29 October 2024 (UTC)Reply