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Latest comment: 1 year ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Thank you to @Greenman for taking the time to review my draft. Sorry it didn't come up to standard. I'm attempting to rectify that. One thing flagged was the submission "appears to read like an advertisement". It's this I need some help with.
Are you able to be clearer on what leads you to that conclusion? I attempted to be cold and factual with the submission, avoiding anything that could be regarded as sales/marketing/advertising. In order that I can remove all hint of advertising from the submission, could you be more specific about where I've gone wrong please? I'm only interested in this fitting Wikipedia's requirements rather than dragging anyone into a debate over it, so rest assured this is a genuine request for education.
Thank you again for reviewing the draft. Really appreciate it. PageSJ (talk) 10:39, 13 April 2023 (UTC)Reply
