Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/The Office (U.S. season 8)/archive2

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 10:01, 2 September 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

The Office (U.S. season 8) edit

Nominator(s): Gen. Quon (Talk) 06:01, 8 July 2013 (UTC) Drovethrughosts 06:01, 8 July 2013 (UTC) NoD'ohnuts 06:01, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am re-nominating this for featured list because I feel it meets all the requirements that have been laid out by Wikipedia:Featured list criteria (I submitted it awhile back, but it got shot down because one editor said it wasn't a list. I'd like to point out that seasons 1, 2, 3, and 4 of the series were promoted to Featured Lists, and many television series' season pages have been promoted to FLs before). The prose is of Good Article quality (which is passed last summer), it features alt text, images, pristine references, and MOS-complying tables. While any critiques would inevitably make this better, I feel it is ready for the next step.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 06:01, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

this was never submitted? Nergaal (talk) 12:26, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Oh dang it... I'll change the dates and "resubmit" it.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:00, 8 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:35, 1 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Maybe inevitable but you have "the" five times in the opening sentence.
Shouldn't "Comedy Night Done Right" be in quotes as it is in the article to which it links?
"new Sabre CEO" who or what is Sabre?
Why isn't the region 4 home media release mentioned in the home media release section?
"this season marked" ... "the season marked" repetitive.
Image captions which aren't complete sentences don't need a period.
"of Salon.com " -> "of Salon"
Don't think you need to link "pregnant".
"he has an emergency appendicitis" do you mean an emergency appendectomy?
"Producer's Cuts of:"-> cuts.
AOLTV->AOL TV.

The Rambling Man (talk) 11:44, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments. How does it look now?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:19, 30 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support Looks great to me. Although you might want to consider in the second paragraph of the lead, right before the sentence that begins "Dwight Schrute...", adding something like "Halfway through the season, " or something. Right now the sentence seems like an unneeded plot summary, but it won't affect my support.Caringtype1 (talk) 17:51, 12 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Thanks for the support and comment!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 02:40, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Support list looks great and is comprehensive. I am sure other people will have better comment than me when it comes to copyediting. Nergaal (talk) 20:17, 27 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Support - though it looks like you introduced a copyedit error when fixing an earlier one- "antics of Robert California (James Spader), the new CEO Sabre". --Pres N 21:42, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Thanks for catching that.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 21:54, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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