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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 31 July 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of songs recorded by Kylie Minogue edit

List of songs recorded by Kylie Minogue (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Damian Vo (talk) 16:16, 2 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'm nominating this for featured list because it meets the criteria for a featured list. Look forward to your comments and suggestions. Damian Vo (talk) 16:16, 2 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • Minogue's image alt text is missing period.
  • The Telegraph in ref 17 should be linked to The Telegraph.
    Not this one. Yashthepunisher (talk) 05:44, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Oops, sorry my bad. I fixed it. Damian Vo (talk) 09:11, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    Actually the source is from The Daily Telegraph. Damian Vo (talk) 09:12, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Impossible Princess (1997) saw the singer adopted a more --> "Impossible Princess (1997) saw the singer adopt a more.."

Yashthepunisher (talk) 15:29, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I resolved everything you mentioned above. Damian Vo (talk) 04:18, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much! Damian Vo (talk) 11:24, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47 edit

  • The image caption for the Kylie Minogue image does not require punctuation as it is not a complete sentence (excellent choice of image by the way).
Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I have two comments for this sentence (who also written and produced Enjoy Yourself (1989), Rhythm of Love (1990), and Let's Get to It (1991).). I believe that “written” should “wrote” in this context. I would also clarify in the prose that these are Minogue’s subsequent studio albums. I was a little confused when reading this and had to click on the links to see what this list was referring to.
Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • For this part (described as "a sophisticated, stylish dance record",), I would clarify in the prose who is doing the describing here. Was it music critics, fans, Minogue, someone from Minogue’s team, etc.?
Added. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • This portion (featured production and songwriting from Sia and Pharrell Williams.) requires a citation.
Added source. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • For this part (which heavily influenced by countryand dance music), it should be “was heavily influenced by”.
Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • For this part (She went on to recorded), it should be “to record”.
Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I am not certain about the use of the word “performed” in this sentence (In 1988, she performed "Especially for You" and the B-side "All I Wanna Do Is Make You Mine" with Jason Donovan.) as it could be misread that she just performed this song rather than recorded it. I would say something like (In 1988, she worked with Jason Donovan on the single “Especially for You” and the B-side “All I Wanna Do Is Make You Mine”.)
Done. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would link “B-side” as there may be people out there that do not know what it means.
Done. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would use “side projects” rather than “side-projects” as I do not believe the hyphen is necessary.
Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would revise this sentence (Kiss Me Once's title track and "Sexercize" were written by Sia) to (Sia wrote Kiss Me Once's title track and "Sexercize".) to avoid the use of the passive voice.
Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Wonderful work with this list. It is very informative, and it makes me want to work on a music-related list. I will support this for promotion once my comments are addressed. If possible, I would greatly appreciate any comments on my current FAC. Either way, I hope you are having a wonderful weekend so far! Aoba47 (talk) 02:35, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I think that's it! Thank you for your kind words, I really do appreciate it. Damian Vo (talk) 08:39, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Great work with this! I support this for promotion. Makes me want to listen to some Kylie Minogue music lol. Have a wonderful rest of your day! Aoba47 (talk) 19:38, 15 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! Damian Vo (talk) 08:17, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Support Nice list.--Lirim | Talk 02:02, 19 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you. Thank you. Damian Vo (talk) 02:45, 19 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Support this nomination. Akhiljaxxn (talk) 05:12, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! Damian Vo (talk) 06:44, 22 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review –

  • What makes Idolator (ref 107) a reliable source for an FL? The article we have on it says it's a blog that was created by Gawker Media. Neither of those facts are encouraging me to say it's reliable. The rest of the references appear reliable enough.
I replaced it with a source from iTunes Store. Damian Vo (talk) 08:03, 27 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Only formatting issue I see is in ref 41, where the title needs an en dash for the year range.
Fixed! Damian Vo (talk) 08:03, 27 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • The link-checker tool shows no problems. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 26 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • With the couple of issues fixed, I'd say this source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 00:08, 29 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! Damian Vo (talk) 05:49, 29 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 02:52, 30 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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