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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 27 May 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of awards and nominations received by Shah Rukh Khan

Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Shah Rukh Khan/archive1

Nominator(s): —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:08, 1 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it is comprehensive enough. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:08, 1 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comment

"Besides acting awards, he has been awarded with a number of state honours" => "Besides acting awards, he has received a number of state honours" would avoid the repetition
"falls in love with the character of Kajol" => "falls in love with the character played by Kajol"
"He was later awarded with the IIFA Award for Best Actor" => "He later received the IIFA Award for Best Actor" (as above)
None of the notes are complete sentences, so they should not have full stops
Ref 1 - I don't think "PR" is a person, so don't list it as the author
That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:46, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 10:49, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:24, 2 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Pseud 14

his first Screen Award of the category. -- "his first Screen Award" should suffice and link it to the award for Best Actor.
as a Bachelor of Law student-turned-alcoholic -- as an alcoholic law student
he received many Best Actor awards - received various
Khan was nominated for a Filmfare award under the Best Actor category -- To make the lead a little less repetitive. I would replace a few instances of "Best actor category" with the "Award for Best Actor"
which he ultimately won the award -- it is not clear which film won him the award. If it is the last, then mention as the latter film
He later received with the IIFA Award for Best Actor -- He later received the IIFA Award for Best Actor
That's it from me. --Pseud 14 (talk) 16:12, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Pseud 14: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk)

Support --Pseud 14 (talk) 02:13, 19 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

If you have some spare time or inclination, would appreciate feedback on my FLC as well. Though not mandatory at all

TRM

Overlinking in lead for Zee Cine Awards.
"next year Khan won" he won, no need to repeat Khan.
Then instead of "His most significant..." go for "Khan's most significant..."
"significant release of the 1990s came with " this may be ENGVAR, but I would say "significant performance of the 1990s came in " or "significant release of the 1990s was "
"for the latter of which he ultimately won the" -> "the latter for which he won the"
"for which he also earned" as this happened before perhaps "for which he had also earned"

Good list. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:03, 17 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:36, 18 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:49, 24 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --Pres N 22:50, 26 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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