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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:33, 12 April 2020 (UTC) [1].[reply]

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Nominator(s): -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:43, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it contains all up-to-date awards and nominations with correct sourcing. The tables also adhere MOS:DTAB. As always, I would appreciate any comments. Thank you! -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:43, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:30, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Prose in the lead is quite choppy, some of the short sentences could do with being combined
  • "She subsequently was cast" => "She was subsequently cast"
  • "Claflin and her were nominated" => "She and Claflin were nominated"
  • "a MTV Movie & TV Award" => "an MTV Movie & TV Award"
  • "and Teen Choice Award" => "and a Teen Choice Award"
  • "In 2019, Time magazine recognized" - she is British, so UK English should be used and therefore the last word should be spelt "recognised"
  • "Clarke also has been honoured" => "Clarke has also been honoured"
  • "she won a Shorty Do Good Award for Best Comedy Video to raise awareness for her charity SameYou" - there seem to be some words missing here, I think it should be something like "she won a Shorty Do Good Award for Best Comedy Video for a video which she made to raise awareness for her charity SameYou"
  • She didn't win all those "best ensemble" awards by herself, so a footnote should be added (like with the awards she won jointly with Claflin). There's no need to list every single other person who won them, but I would certainly add a note saying something like "shared with other main cast members".
  • Note a is not a complete sentence so doesn't need a full stop.
  • Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:37, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Aoba47 (talk) 08:30, 18 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
* For this part, (a role for which she was nominated for a Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Supporting Actress in a Drama Series three times and Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Lead Actress in a Drama Series for the final season in 2019), I would add a "a" in front of the phrase "Primetime Emmy Award for Outstanding Lead Actress in a Drama Series" since it is separate from the Supporting Actress award.
  • I would remove "also" in this part: (Clarke also won a Saturn Award for Best Actress on Television in 2019) The previous sentence only mentions nominations so the "also" does not make sense in this context. The next sentence also uses "also" so it slightly repetitive anyway.
  • The first paragraph's final sentence does not have a citation.
  • For this part, (For her role of Qi'ra in the 2018 film Solo: A Star Wars Story she was nominated), I think there should be a comma between "Story" and "she".
  • In the table, for the 2019 "Best Ensemble in a Drama Series" win, I would put note a before note d as I think it looks a little odd to have them out of order.
  • Clarke won a SFX Award in 2013 for her performance on Game of Thrones. Is that notable enough to include in the table?
  • I couldn't find a reference for the 2013 SFX Award. It looks like archive.org is down as well so I can't see the archived versions. I omitted it until I could get a reference. -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:50, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • So I dug a bit deeper and found a few archived versions. I added the award to the table. -- LuK3 (Talk) 13:08, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Great work with the list. I only have a few nit-picky comments, and once everything is addressed, I will be more than happy to support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 02:18, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments Aoba47. I addressed all of them above. -- LuK3 (Talk) 12:35, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for addressing everything. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 20:22, 23 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 22:20, 24 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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Source check

  • PR Newswire isn't an RS
  • Inconsistent linking of the publisher/owner
  • Inconsistent use of the publisher/owner
  • Inconsistent linking of the publication

--Guerillero | Parlez Moi 14:18, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Guerillero, I believe I addressed all of the sourcing comments. -- LuK3 (Talk) 15:02, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Guerillero: just a follow-up to the source check. I want to make sure I took care of everything. -- LuK3 (Talk) 16:30, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 18:35, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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