Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of accolades received by Dil Dhadakne Do/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 23:30, 11 November 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]
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I am nominating this for featured list because Dil Dhadakne Do is an excellent film filled with four great performances and its real portrayal of a modern Indian family and society is simply amazing. I feel that the list meets the FL criteria. Looking forward to lots of feedback on this. Krish | Talk 10:19, 19 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Aoba47
- For phrases like this in the table ((for song "Dil Dhadakne Do), I would imagine that a “the” should be put in front of song. It reads awkwardly without it.
- This film seemed to have receive several nominations for its songs. Do you think that should mentioned in the lead?
Once my relatively minor comments are addressed, I will support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 15:48, 25 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Kailash
- as the family Dog Pluto - Is it really necessary to mention Aamir Khan's character name in the lead?
- Dil Dhadakne Do was released worldwide on 5 June 2015 to generally positive reviews from critics.[1][2][3] - Those are individual reviews and cannot be used to say the film's overall response was positive. Perhaps you may want to use a source that actually says the film received positive reviews, like this one. Citing three or more sources consecutively for a single sentence creates citation clutter, so you may keep the limit to two sources; one that mentions the release date (in past tense) and the other for the reviews. Or one that has both.
- It received five Filmfare nominations - We generally don't begin paragraphs with such terms. Perhaps you could write, Dil Dhadakne Do received five Filmfare nominations, winning Best Supporting Actor for Kapoor. It received nine nominations at the 2016 Screen Awards. You may also want to mention Shefali Shah and Anushka Sharma's Filmfare nominations.
- How exactly is List of Bollywood films of 2015 relevant to this article? --Kailash29792 (talk) 15:11, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Kailash29792: Done.Krish | Talk 19:46, 27 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Hope this passes FLC. Kailash29792 (talk) 02:23, 29 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Yashthepunisher
- The english translation of the title should be mentioned.
- I don't know of any award list article which gives an english translation of the title. So I don't think it needs that.Krish | Talk 08:59, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- [2] [3] [4] Hope these are enough examples for you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:22, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't think it's an requirement. Plus, if people want to know the meaning, they can click the link to the parent article. Anyways, I think people will come to this article after reading the parent article not the other way around. Don't you think?Krish | Talk 18:06, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry for jumping in on this conversation, but I agree that the English translation should be present in the first sentence. You should not assume how the reader reaches this article, and I would say that this bit of information could be presented in the list rather easily instead of making someone click to a new page. Aoba47 (talk) 02:37, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't think it's an requirement. Plus, if people want to know the meaning, they can click the link to the parent article. Anyways, I think people will come to this article after reading the parent article not the other way around. Don't you think?Krish | Talk 18:06, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- [2] [3] [4] Hope these are enough examples for you. Yashthepunisher (talk) 10:22, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Fullstop missing from the alt text.
- "Produced by Ritesh Sidhwani and Farhan Akhtar, it features.." Replace 'it' with 'the film'.
- "while the cinematography and editing were provided by Carlos Catalan, and Anand Subaya and Manan Mehta," This sentence is quite confusing, who has done what? Please rephrase it.
Yashthepunisher (talk) 07:29, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- @Yashthepunisher: Done.Krish | Talk 08:59, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Yashthepunisher (talk) 03:38, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, almost ready to promote, but: are notes b and c supposed to be the same? If so, it should be a named, reused note, not two separate ones. --PresN 22:13, 10 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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