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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:31, 26 August 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of West Indies cricketers who have taken five-wicket hauls on Test debut edit

Featured list candidates/List of West Indies cricketers who have taken five-wicket hauls on Test debut/archive1

Nominator(s): Lugnuts and Khadar Khani (talk) 17:29, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I have expanded and polished the list, created by Lugnuts back in 2011. I am happy to have him as co-nominator. I think this list now meets the FL criteria so going to nominate this one. Review, suggestions and comments from any user are appreciated, as always. Regards, Khadar Khani (talk) 17:29, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 09:01, 24 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Row and col scopes needed for each table per MOS:DTT.
- Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
" at three different venues, including three outside " something not quite right here...
- Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"he took five "->"taking five"
- Fixed. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
" at the Old Trafford," NEVER "the" Old Trafford.
- Fixed. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Don't overlink "innings".
- Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
"As of 2017, the most recent bowler to achieve the feat was Sammy. He took seven wickets for 66 runs in his debut Test, against England in 2007.[5][1]" merge those short sentences and put refs in order.
- Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Bowler names should sort using {{sortname}}.
- Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 09:14, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! 10:06, 20 July 2017 (UTC)

Thanks Rambles - was just about to drop you a note about this nomination. Lugnuts ^{Fire Walk with Me} 10:14, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Ianblair23 (talk) 02:25, 5 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

:Hi Khadar Khani and Lugnuts, please find my comments below:

Lead

refers to a bowler taking five fix link to Bowling (cricket) Done
five or more wickets link to Wicket#Dismissing a batsman Done
in a single innings fix link to innings Done
As of July 2017, update to August 2017 and add Template:As of Done
148 cricketers have taken a five-wicket haul on their debut in a Test match fix link to List of cricketers who have taken five-wicket hauls on Test debut Done
nine of them being taken by West Indian players fix link to West Indies cricket team Done
four times against England fix link to England cricket team Done
and Sri Lanka each.[6] replace ref with this link [2] Done
the West Indies won the match four times, and drew once added these two refs [3], [4]

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

five of them have achieved the feat at Sabina Park, Kingston, Jamaica.[7] replace ref with [5]a and reword as follows at Sabina Park in Kingston, Jamaica

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

against England in 1950, at Old Trafford, Manchester fix link to Old Trafford Cricket Ground and change ref to [6]

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Johnson is the most economical fix link to Economy rate (cricket)

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

with 1.17 runs per over added this ref [7]

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Sammy has the best strike rate link to Strike rate#Bowling strike rate, "of 18.4 ball per wicket" and add this ref [8]

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

As of 2017 add Template:As of
I think it would be great to add that Johnson is one of only nine bowlers to take two five-wicket hauls on debut [9]

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 14:38, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Key

Add Bowler = The bowler who took the five-wicket haul Done
Date the match was held, or starting date of the match for Test matches change to simply "Starting date of the Test match" Done
The innings of the match fix link to Innings Done
overs bowled in that innings change to "in the innings" Done
Econ sharper link to Economy rate (cricket) Done
Bowler selected as "Man of the match" sharper link Player of the Match awards (cricket) Done

Table

Need to add Johnson's second five-wicket haul. See List of England cricketers who have taken five-wicket hauls on Test debut (refer to Frederick Martin fifth on the list for what I mean)

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 15:07, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Fix the three links to Old Trafford Cricket Ground and add ",England" after Manchester to be consistent in the table

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 15:07, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Refs

Ref 11 – add date=17 April 2007 Done
Refs 12 to 17 – change Cricinfo to ESPNcricinfo to be consistent Done

Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 09:15, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Ian - appreciate your comments. Will start to work through them. Lugnuts ^{Fire Walk with Me} 09:19, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Ianblair23, thanks for the review. I hope your concerns are now resolved accordingly! Regards, Khadar Khani (talk) 15:12, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks guys, I have made a few more changes including adding archive links for the refs. Could you please make one change and add this ref [10] after and Valentine are the only West Indian to take ten in a match wickets on debut. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 07:23, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Done. Khadar Khani (talk) 07:32, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Support Great job Khadar Khani and Lugnuts! Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 02:26, 5 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Ian! Lugnuts ^{Fire Walk with Me} 07:50, 5 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

~~Comment~~ Support – "Johnson and Valentine are the only West Indian to take ten in a match wickets on debut". The grammar is faulty here; it should be "Johnson and Valentine are the only West Indians to take ten wickets in a match on debut". Giants2008 (Talk) 21:18, 9 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 21:26, 9 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comment my only quibble is this: "The players have taken five-wicket hauls at three different venues, three outside the West Indies" - this makes it sound like the fifers were taken at three different venues, of which three venues were outside the Windies, which isn't true of course. I would suggest reworking the whole sentence to: "The players have taken five-wicket hauls at three different venues, two in the West Indies and one overseas. The most common venue for a West Indies player to achieve the feat is Sabina Park in Kingston, Jamaica, where it has occurred five times. All three hauls which occurred overseas took place at Old Trafford in Manchester, England." -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 06:32, 19 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: done as you suggested! Thanks for the comment. Khadar Khani (talk) 06:57, 19 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

In that case I am happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:18, 20 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --Pres N 12:04, 25 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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