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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 22:44, 18 November 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Regine Velasquez live performances

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List of Regine Velasquez live performances (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 20:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list after working on getting the singer's list of songs, awards, filmography, and discography to FL status. It has gone through a copy-edit to improve the lead. Constructive criticism, in any form and from anyone, will be appreciated.

A pre-emptive comment – Philippine live entertainment/concerts are largely staged either as arena or theater (small-scale) events. These venues are mainly located in the capital region of Metro Manila. For logistical reasons, Filipino live acts rarely/never tour domestically, contrary to what is commonly seen for U.S. touring acts. I’ve tried my best to thoroughly search for RS (publications, newspapers, etc.) that are available online, especially since information dating back in the 80s and 90s has been a challenge to find. I utilized a website/artist page that compiled a list of concert information, which perhaps can be an acceptable substitute where publications/newspapers/online articles are unavailable. Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pamzeis

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Placeholder for now. I'll likely leave comments tomorrow. Happy editing! Pamzeis (talk) 13:29, 29 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support — apologies for the wait, I'd forgotten about this but no major issues that I can see. I've made a few minor tweaks. On the image, is there any chance that it could be replaced with one of her looking towards the article/text? At the current moment, it draws the reader's eye away from the article... BTW, I'd appreciate any comments here. Thanks. Pamzeis (talk) 02:43, 2 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Pamzeis: thanks for your edits, I've also replaced the image. I will have a look at the PR some time this week. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:37, 2 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "She also [...] spawned the release" - "she spawned the release" is rather odd wording
Reworded the sentence
  • "Throughout 2013 to 2016" => "From 2013 to 2016"
Done
  • No need to link Bantay Bata Foundation twice
Done
@ChrisTheDude: thanks for your review. I have addressed the above comments. Pseud 14 (talk) 21:06, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: many thanks for your support! Pseud 14 (talk) 21:58, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from Aoba47

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  • For this part, televised performances on The Penthouse Live!, Triple Treat and other shows, I am not sure about the current wording, specifically the "and other shows" part. Would it be better to say something along the lines of televised performances on shows like The Penthouse Live! and Triple Treat instead?
Agreed, revised the wording.

This is my only comment (and it is admittedly super nitpick-y). Once this has been addressed, I will be more than happy to support this FLC for promotion. Great work as always. I hope you are having a great week so far! Aoba47 (talk) 11:03, 11 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: thanks very much for your review, I have addressed the above comment. I hope your week is going well too! Pseud 14 (talk) 13:52, 11 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Aoba47: much appreciate your support! I will have a look at the FAC some time this weekend. Pseud 14 (talk) 18:59, 11 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 22:48, 11 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:16, 18 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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