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List of Armenia international footballers edit

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Nominator(s): Kosack (talk) 20:27, 23 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I have prepared the page to the same standard as my recently promoted international footballer lists and believe it meets the required criteria. I have one active nomination already which has three support votes, no outstanding comments and has been open for more than two months. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 20:27, 23 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • "Having made his international debut in his countries'" => "Having made his international debut in his country's"
    • "As of November 2018, " - is this still accurate?
    • "Moldova were not mebers" - spelling error there
    • Aras Özbiliz sorts at the bottom when the table is sorting by name, presumably due to the diacritic on the O
  • Think that's it from me...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:30, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: Thanks for the review, I've fixed the three issues raised above. In regards to the November date, that was their most recent match. I've left it as then as it's probably more clear when updating. Let me know if there's anything else. Kosack (talk) 15:15, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sorry, I just noticed one other thing - Hovsepyan's 100th match is said to have come in a game against Spain, but it you look at the RSSSF link, that was only his 100th match if the inaugural unrecognised international is included. So either change it to say that he got his 100th cap in the following game, or clarify that the Spain game was only his 100th if that first international is included. Does that make sense.......? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:21, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: My mistake, I wrote that before the non-FIFA cap issue came up and forgot to correct it. I've adjusted now to compensate for that. Kosack (talk) 17:34, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - nice one -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:34, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments
    • Strike the comma after "1992" in the first sentence. - Done
    • "... although the match is not recognised by FIFA as Moldova were not affiliated to the organisation at the time." I usually think of teams being affiliated with an organization. Change "to" to "with" unless this language is commonly used in association football. - Done
    • I'd probably put a comma between "Ukraine" and "having". (2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence) - Done
    • "...he earned his 100th cap in a 4–0 defeat to Spain..." Again, this could be common terminology in the sport, but I'd try something like "defeat of Spain" or (better yet) "defeat over Spain. See the same in the sentence following this one ("defeat to Lithuania")
      • Just to chime in here, "a 4-0 defeat to Spain" means that Armenia lost 4-0. So to say "defeat of Spain" would be totally incorrect -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:33, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
        • (Haha...) Nevermind, I think I briefly thought caps were about scoring goals, not appearing in games. Thanks, Chris. NatureBoyMD (talk) 16:40, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • "As of November 2018, Henrikh Mkhitaryan is Armenia's leading goalscorer of all time having scored 26 goals." Add a comma before "having". - Done
    • "Goalkeeper Roman Berezovsky is the second highest..." Add a hyphen, making it "second-highest". - Done
    • "Appearances and goals are composed of FIFA World Cup and UEFA European Championship and each competition's required qualification matches..." I think this reads better as "Appearances and goals are composed of FIFA World Cups, UEFA European Championships, and each competition's required qualification matches...") for clarity. - Done
    • The numbering is off starting with #17; the two previous players are tied for #16, so Hrayr Mkoyan should be #18 with the subsequent numbers adjusted as well. - Done
    • Image caption: "Henrikh Mkhitaryan is Armenia's record goalscorer with 26 goals" Add a period to the end. - Done
    • Image caption: "Roman Berezovsky is the second highest capped played in Armenian history with 94 caps." Add a hyphen for "second-highest". - Done
    • Note "C": Remove the period - Done
    • References 10, 15, and 16 should have titles in title case like the others. - Done
  • Otherwise, everything looks good. NatureBoyMD (talk) 16:24, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the comments, made a quick start. Should finish the rest later. Kosack (talk) 17:34, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@NatureBoyMD: I've finished off these points now, let me know if there is anything else. Kosack (talk) 20:12, 29 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "Sargis Hovsepyan is Armenia's most capped player..." avoid the repeat of "cap" in this sentence, perhaps just make the second one "appearances"? - Done
  • You mention Berezovsky's position (slight sea of blue though) but not Hovsepyan. - Done (and avoided back-to-back links)
  • Not keen at all with the mixed date formats in each reference.
Fixed this now, an archive bot added a different date format when doing it's work recently.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:25, 17 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, I've amended all of the issues raised above. Let me know if there's anything else. Kosack (talk) 09:20, 21 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Support works for me. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:08, 21 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 20:09, 27 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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