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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 01:14, 29 September 2008 [1].

Chimaira discography

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Cannibaloki 16:41, 17 September 2008 (UTC) Comments:[reply]

  • Lead section
    • Do not link "American"
    • "a extended play" -> "an extended play" or "one extended play"
      •  Not done "a extended play" is a advice of The Rambling Man
        • I don't think so. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:36, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
          • At Opeth FLC you said: "The "one video" in the lead - is this a video album per the infobox?" Cannibaloki 18:06, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
            • Yeah, well "a video album" because the word after the indefinite article (the "a") starts with a consonant (the "v" of video) and in this case it should be "an extended play" because the word after the indefinite article starts with a vowel (the "e" of extended) - does that make sense? The Rambling Man (talk) 13:55, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      •  Done Cannibaloki 20:45, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • "which sold 10,000 copies" needs a credible reference
    • "was successful in the United States." also needs a reference, e.g. a chart position ref.
      • I removed this information, because there are no sources.
    • "After an internal crisis, the band moved on from Roadrunner and signed a new deal with Ferret Music." needs a reference
    • The types of release (i.e. studio albums, extended plays...) could be linked, though I'm not sure if this is essential
    • The picture in the infobox should be of the whole band
      •  Not done This information is new to me! There are NO rules about the images, since it is related to band.
  • Studio albums
    • The Norway chart position column needs a reference; find it at norwegian-charts.com
    • Catalog numbers should ideally be small; use <small></small> tags
      • Only ideally, just because I implemented this way of use them. (← hehehe) Cannibaloki 16:20, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Other than that the list is looking good; the references are mainly reliable and credible, and this seems set out nicely. If you want me to make the changes instead of making you do them all, I would be happy to help. Andre666 (talk) 22:22, 17 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Most of your comments are (in my opinion) optionals, but I used many of them. Cannibaloki 16:20, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from SRX

Comments

  • Their first release was the independently issued debut EP, This Present Darkness, which sold 10,000 copies and was successful in the United States. - what made it successful?
  • For resurrection on the Norway charts, you should place ref 9 as the main ref as the other releases did not chart in Norway.
  • This release contain two discs; the first disc is a DVD, and in the second disc includes a remastered CD version of This Present Darkness EP. - source for this? (Video album)
  • In the lead, most discographies list the charts the albums have been released on and their peaked positions.

--SRX 23:40, 17 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All of your comments were adressed. Cannibaloki 16:20, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:01, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, cool. Cannibaloki 16:20, 18 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Weak oppose

  • Caption doesn't need the full stop.
    •  Done removed (don't was me that added!)
  • Add (EP) after "Extended Play".
    •  Done Hmm.
  • "the band released their next album The Impossibility of Reason, the album peaked at" - "...Reason and peaked..."?
    •  Done reworded
  • "...issued in 2005, and peaked at number 74..." - "2005 which peaked..."
    •  Done reworded
  • "After an internal crisis" - explain please.
    •  Done I think, but maybe needs grammar cleanup
  • "the original drummer Andols Herrick joined" - "Andols Herrick rejoined..."
    •  Done reworded for a better way...
  • "making their best ever" - "the band's highest chart position..."
    •  Done reworded ("...their best ever..." ←hehehe) Cannibaloki 17:31, 25 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:08, 24 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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