Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/1992 College Baseball All-America Team/archive1

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The list was promoted by Dabomb87 21:44, 28 September 2010 [1].

1992 College Baseball All-America Team edit

Featured list candidates/1992 College Baseball All-America Team/archive1

Nominator(s): TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:40, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because it is the same quality as the 1991 College Baseball All-America Team, which was promoted a couple months ago.TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 19:40, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Note Removed from FLC list; please wait until your first nomination (Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/2009 NCAA Men's Basketball All-Americans/archive1) receives significant support before relisting. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:14, 22 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Three support and no opposes now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 13:07, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comment—no dab links, no dead external links. Ucucha 22:53, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:19, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"he 1992 All-American class featured 3 Major League Baseball All-Stars, 2 Olympians, one Major League Baseball record holder and a 2-time World Series champion" -MOSNUM = three, two, one, two-time...
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:04, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Don't mix date formats in the refs.
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:01, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
You have a template whose main article doesn't exist. This is borderline grounds for TFD'ing the template.
- I was just going to change the link to go to college baseball and All-American, but I created an article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:45, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 18:19, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Accomplishment section seems a little weak given a number of these guys seem to have awards.
- Do you want the last paragraph of the WP:LEAD in the accomplishments section? Do you want me to talk about other collegiate awards such as Golden Spikes Award , Rotary Smith Award], College World Series Most Outstanding Player and Dick Howser Trophy?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:10, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - I'm saying that your "Notes" column pretty much relates to accomplishments of the various players. These could be discussed, expanded upon so the prose doesn't have a weak feel about it (which, in my opinion, it does). The Rambling Man (talk) 17:52, 13 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - I have moved the paragraph into the accomplishments section. The only other thing I could really do to beef it up is add the four awards above when relevant. I will do so now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 04:37, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Courcelles 08:30, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

*Comments

"Various organizations selected All-American lists of the best players for the 1991 NCAA Division I college baseball season." Is this left-over form the 1991 list?

Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 08:15, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

These are only the Division I players, right? Perhaps should be made more explicit.

Done.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 08:18, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The refs had some inconsistent date formatting; I just fixed it with the script.

Thanks.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 08:18, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks like pretty good work, all things considered. Courcelles 07:57, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Support Courcelles 08:30, 14 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Giants2008 (27 and counting) 21:05, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments –

In Accomplishments, I see multiple misspellings of Jason Varitek's last name as Veritek (three in the section's first paragraph).
- Thanks--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:30, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Hammonds led the National League in fielding with 1.000 fielding percentage...". Add "a" before the number.
- Good eye.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:30, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Comma needed for the number in "1000 hits".
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:32, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Both Chris Roberts and McConnell ~~both~~ played Baseball at the 1992 Summer Olympics." The struck word is an unnecessary repeat, and Baseball should be lower-case.
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:35, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Also de-capitalize Champion in "World Series Champion".
- thanks.
The general source and reference 6 (the same link) should have PDF indications. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 23:18, 18 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- O.K.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 02:43, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Support – Meets FL standards. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 21:05, 19 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Support – Look good to me. Harrias ^talk 09:32, 26 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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