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Rudolf Vrba

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As of 13 November 2024, 16:20 (UTC), this page is active and open for discussion. A FAR coordinator will advance or close this nomination when consensus is reached.

• Featured article candidates/Rudolf Vrba

• Featured article review/Rudolf Vrba/archive1
• Featured article review/Rudolf Vrba/archive2

Notified: Jayjg, WikiProject Biography, WikiProject Jewish history, WikiProject Slovakia, WikiProject Hungary, WikiProject European history, WikiProject Military history, 2024-06-25

Review section

I am nominating this featured article for review because, per WP:TOOLONG, the article at 11,000 words should probably be summarised more effectively and reduced. The article over-emphasises the Vrba–Wetzler report, and the lead is missing biographical information. Z1720 (talk) 18:55, 5 October 2024 (UTC)

• Move to FARC: no edits to the article, issues remain unaddressed. Z1720 (talk) 12:45, 16 October 2024 (UTC)
• Move to FARC. It would be one thing if the article just needed a trim, but the concerns about comprehensiveness, neutrality, etc. that Buidhe listed in the 2018 FAR don't seem to have ever been engaged with. This needs some work, I think. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 00:54, 20 October 2024 (UTC)

FARC section

Issues raised in the review section include comprehensiveness and organization. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:52, 26 October 2024 (UTC)

• Delist No substantial edits to address concerns. Z1720 (talk) 16:23, 10 November 2024 (UTC)
• Delist – issues remain. Extraordinary Writ (talk) 19:53, 10 November 2024 (UTC)