Your submission at Articles for creation: The Deltahorse (January 6)

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MRD2014 (talkcontribs) 16:12, 6 January 2017 (UTC)Reply


 
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Managing a conflict of interest

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  Hello, Slower Faster Music. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places, or things you have written about in the article Draft:The Deltahorse, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic, and it is important when editing Wikipedia articles that such connections be completely transparent. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. In particular, we ask that you please:

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Your submission at Articles for creation: The Deltahorse (January 9)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
SwisterTwister talk 18:18, 9 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your advice, Team Articles for Creation. I will go over the text again, do corrections and resubmit revision. Christian KatzmannCK KC (talk) 11:57, 12 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Here's to the new article, revisions included.Christina KatzmannCK KC (talk) 14:25, 12 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your suggestions, Vchimpanzee!. I think they improved the overall quality of the article. Expanded Bare URL's, also cleaned up references. Please check out revision below, I hope all is fine now. Thanks! CK KC (talk) 13:05, 1 February 2017 (UTC)Christina KatzmannReply

The Deltahorse is a rocktronic music project comprised of members who have never been altogether in the same place at the same time. Led by singer-songwriter Vadim Zeberg[1] from Belfast (UK), founder and bassist/producer Sash[2] from Berlin (Germany), ex-Morphine saxophonist Dana Colley from Boston (USA) the trio solely uses file swapping and the internet to write and record their music. The fact that they never play or record together yet manage to overcome the geographical separation by writing cohesive arrangements has been documented by media such as Elmore Magazine, who premiered the band's debut video [3], based on the one-shot concept.

In 2013 Colley and Sash released a debut EP which featured Sydneyʼs TJ Eckleberg as singer-songwriter. The self-titled EP premiered at The Big Takeover where the band’s style has been compared to Berlin-era Bowie and Beck [4]. With new singer Vadim Zeberg taking over vocal duties, The Deltahorse released their full-length album Transatlantic in September 2016 [5]. The album’s first single 'Call It A Day‘ premiered on Impose Magazine, who stated that “the band blends their multicultural influence via file swapping from their homes into an insane musical force to be reckoned with [6].“ The album made it onto several Top 30 College Radio Charts lists[7] [8] peaking at #158 on CMJ College Radio 200 Charts in October 2016. ‘Call It A Day‘ has been featured on BBC Radio Ulster’s show Across the Line in January 2017. [9]

Discography

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  • The Deltahorse EP - 2013 (self-released)
  • Transatlantic[10] - 2016 (Slower Faster)
  • A Happy Heart (album single and remixes)[11] - 2017 (Slower Faster)
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  • Official Website [1]

Discography

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  • The Deltahorse EP[12] - 2013 (self-released)
  • Transatlantic[13] - 2016 (Slower Faster)
  • A Happy Heart (album single and remixes)[14] - 2017 (Slower Faster)
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• Official Website

January 2017

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Welcome to Wikipedia. Because we have a policy against usernames which give the impression that the account represents a group, organization or website, I have blocked this account; please take a moment to create a new account with a username that represents only yourself as an individual and which complies with our username policy or request a change of username.

You should also read our conflict of interest guideline and be aware that promotional editing is not acceptable regardless of the username you choose.

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Hi Rick, thanks for keeping an eye open on the Wikipedia policy, let's see how I can contribute to making it all transparent (yes I have read the articles on COI, still some questions left on my end). - I am NOT a paid contributor for work submitted nor do I receive any money from people I wrote about. - Yes, I am writing about people I know or have met in person though providing information from a neutral point of view, only referencing what media has written (references included in article) Even if I changed my username, facts mentioned above still would apply. Can you please point me into the right direction? What would be the best way to proceed? Thank you in advance, Christina KatzmannSlower Faster Music (talk) 14:30, 10 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Hi Christina, I would recommend at the least a username change that does not reflect the name of an organization as this one currently does. Also, thank you for stating your COI, and you, once your username has changed, can follow the directions on WP:DISCLOSURE to state your COI on the talk page of the page you're working on. I would advise that your edits MUST be neutral, and contain factual information from reliable sources that are independent from the subject itself. RickinBaltimore (talk) 18:52, 10 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for your advice, Rick. Will do and then resubmit. Christina KatzmannCK KC (talk) 11:42, 12 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

 
This user's request to be unblocked to request a change in username has been reviewed by an administrator, who accepted the request.

CK KC (block logactive blocksglobal blocksautoblockscontribsdeleted contribsfilter logcreation logchange block settingsunblockcheckuser (log))


Requested username:

Request reason:

As discussed above with the help of reviewer RickinBaltimore--please change my username and allow me to state my COI rather than me setting up a new account. All information provided are/will be as neutral as possible. Thank you.

Accept reason:

Renamed and unblocked, welcome back. Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 11:07, 11 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

Thank you, merci, gracias, Boing! said Zebedee. Christina KatzmannCK KC (talk) 11:38, 12 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

No problem, de rien, de nada. Boing! said Zebedee (talk) 11:52, 12 January 2017 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:The Deltahorse has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:The Deltahorse. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 20:40, 13 January 2017 (UTC)Reply
  1. ^ Discogs. "Vadim Zeberg". Kevin Lewandowski.
  2. ^ Discogs. "Sash". Kevin Lewandowski.
  3. ^ Gawlak, Emily. "The Deltahorse Debuts a Simple but Mesmerizing Video for "Call It a Day"". Elmore Magazine. Suzanne Cadgene. Retrieved 27 October 2016.
  4. ^ Exclusives, Big Takeover. "BT Exclusive: Debut EP by The Deltahorse". www.bigtakeover.com. Jack Rabid. Retrieved November 19, 2013.
  5. ^ Moore, John B. "The Deltahorse: Transatlantic". Innocent Words. Troy Michael. Retrieved December 1, 2016.
  6. ^ Schneider, Meredith. "Debut: The Deltahorse, "Call It A Day"". Impose Magazine. Impose Media. Retrieved 21 September 2016.
  7. ^ KJHK 90.7 FM. "Charts & Adds: October 30th – November 6th, 2016". www.kjhk.org. University of Kansas, Lawrence. Retrieved November 6, 2016.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list (link)
  8. ^ WUMD 89.3FM. "CMJ/NACC Radio 200 Charting for week of 11 Oct 2016". www.893wumd.org. University of Massachusetts Dartmouth. Retrieved October 11, 2016.{{cite web}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list (link)
  9. ^ Across the, Line. "ATL's Track for the Day #412, The Deltahorse". BBC Radio Ulster. BBC. Retrieved 25 January 2017.
  10. ^ AllMusic. "The Deltahorse - Transatlantic". www.allmusic.com. RhythmOne Group. Retrieved September 30, 2016. {{cite web}}: |last1= has generic name (help)
  11. ^ MusicBrainz. "A Happy Heart (Single+Remixes)". www.musicbrainz.org. MetaBrainz Foundation, CA, USA.
  12. ^ Exclusives, Big Takeover. "Debut EP by The Deltahorse". www.bigtakeover.com. Jack Rabid.
  13. ^ AllMusic. "The Deltahorse - Transatlantic". www.allmusic.com. RhythmOne Group. Retrieved September 30, 2016. {{cite web}}: |last1= has generic name (help)
  14. ^ MusicBrainz. "A Happy Heart (Single+Remixes)". www.musicbrainz.org. MetaBrainz Foundation, CA, USA.
 
Hello, CK KC. Your question has been answered at the Teahouse Q&A board. Feel free to reply there!
Please note that all old questions are archived after 2-3 days of inactivity. Message added by — Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 19:26, 20 January 2017 (UTC). (You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{teahouse talkback}} template).Reply
There really should be more detail in the article. I haven't looked at the sources. All I did was let you know someone responded at The Teahouse.— Vchimpanzee • talk • contributions • 16:17, 1 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: The Deltahorse (February 18)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 17:02, 18 February 2017 (UTC)Reply

Draft:The Deltahorse concern

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Your draft article, Draft:The Deltahorse

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Hello, CK KC. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "The Deltahorse".

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