RiverTripper

Your submission at Articles for creation: William Fay (film producer) (January 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Mattdaviesfsic was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 08:48, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

Hello, RiverTripper! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 08:48, 10 January 2023 (UTC)

Mattdaviesfsic Thank you for reviewing and providing feedback on this article submission. The feedback about the first paragraph having no sources, I wanted to explain that it did have sources when I submitted it, but another editor apparently removed them. I thought since all the other sources in my research were strong (reliable) that supplementing a weaker source for one sentence would not be an issue. If it is, then why would the editor who removed the source just remove the source and not just remove the first sentence since it is now unsourced? I’ve seen articles with facts that are unsourced and typically they get a “citation needed” notation. PS: I thought I put this comment/question on the talk page of the article, and tagged your there, but when I went back to look it wasn’t there. I apologize if you are tagged twice on the same issue. Thanks for the note back. RiverTripper (talk) 18:10, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Hi RiverTripper, thanks for pinging me - just looked through the History. Yes, the IMDB source was removed (see WP:RSPS for more on this). The filmography still needs sourcing (even if one source covers all of it), although - of course - IMDB cannot be used as it is unreliable. When you do resubmit after these minor issues have been fixed, I'm sure it will be accepted. Hope that helps. Mattdaviesfsic (talk) 18:18, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:William Fay (film producer)

Hello, RiverTripper. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:William Fay (film producer), a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 09:02, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:William Fay (film producer)

Hello, RiverTripper. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, "William Fay".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 19:21, 28 May 2024 (UTC)