Rdozzz

Your submission at Articles for creation: Capital Markets Cooperative Research Centre (February 18)

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Missvain (talk) 00:35, 18 February 2015 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (July 20)

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Vincent60030 (talk) 04:52, 20 July 2015 (UTC)

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Hi, thanks for message. I've had another look, and I'm satisfied that although there were resemblances to the LinkIn text, it was probably not enough to constitute copyright infringement. Having said that, I think there are issues you need to address before resubmitting.

• Your use of bare urls is unhelpful, add a description using <ref>[url description]</ref> see Pamela C. Rasmussen to see what the refs shuld look like (although you don't have to use the fancy templates that are used there.
• Paywalled refs, like The Australian and Financial Review are not going to help most readers, better to replace with a free-to-read source
• independent verifiable sources should be just that. Sources that are not acceptable include sites affiliated to her, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what shey claims or interviewing her.
• it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. The tone is hagiographic, and contains many claims that are unsourced, not stated in the supposed reference, inappropriately sourced or unverifiable. Examples include: an unusual career path for any man or woman... She has been cited in various media as one of Australia’s most influential people in innovation (just repeats another vague unsourced claim,)... ferocious networking skills... successful commercialization... is credited with successfully re-positioning private equity... growing and now successful businesses... assisting Australian technology companies to succeed in the US... — and so on
• the article is seriously underlinked , eg China has an article, and some links are unclear eg CRC.
• Speaking of which, the article wanders into a discussion of the achievements of CRC rather than her
• neutral tone would be greatly appreciated— I don't understand this, surely it's your responsibility to write a neutral article?

I'll restore shortly Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:26, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Katherine Woodthorpe (August 11)

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LaMona (talk) 22:04, 11 August 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Katherine Woodthorpe concern

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Your draft article, Draft:Katherine Woodthorpe

Hello, Rdozzz. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Katherine Woodthorpe".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 21:12, 7 March 2016 (UTC)