ITN recognition for Celia Barquín ArozamenaEdit
|... you were recipient|
no. 1740 of Precious,
a prize of QAI!
ITN recognition for Hiroshi WajimaEdit
and now after many many additional edits the article 'flows' strangely. In particular you had added a paragraph beginning:
- At the time of the book's publication ...
At that time of editing, the most recent newsy event was that the author had written Return to the Hundred Acre Wood. It would seem then that your sentence was referring to that book. But the article mentions other books and works between the lede and this now abrupt sentence.
It would be good of you to make clear to this dull reader which book is being referred to. Perhaps the third/fourth paragraphs currently under 'Life' ought to be moved to their own section and specifically about his 2009 book? Shenme (talk) 01:39, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
- @Shenme: I'll take a look at it. I agree it reads oddly now. It was indeed the publicity over his Pooh sequel that prompted me to edit the article - and the that I had played chess with him a few years earlier when we were both members of Dulwich Chess Club!-- Pawnkingthree (talk) 13:41, 13 November 2018 (UTC)