AfC notification: Draft:Benjamin Jordan has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Benjamin Jordan. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 22:32, 10 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Benjamin Jordan (November 10)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
DGG ( talk ) 23:08, 10 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
 
Hello, LyndsayNicole! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 23:08, 10 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Benjamin Jordan (November 11)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
Robert McClenon (talk) 22:58, 11 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Analysis of your sources

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You may be wondering why Draft:Benjamin Jordan keeps getting rejected. The reasons are described in Wikipedia:Golden rule. Let me go over those sources:

You have one good source and one reasonable source, but they are buried in a pile of junk sources. I recommend you completely get rid of the trivial mentions and focus on writing an article around sources that provide actual coverage. ~Anachronist (talk) 15:17, 15 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Thank you very much for your detailed analysis of my draft article. I really appreciate your help and will work on obtaining more relevant references before re-submitting my work. LyndsayNicole (talk) 16:02, 15 November 2020 (UTC)Reply


you also asked me for further comment. Looking at the present article, I see no major press coverage: I think the two sources the above reviewer found acceptable or possibly acceptable are hobbyist or local sources, which usually are not counted as heavily for notability . In addition, WP being in the Guiness book of records has almost never been accepted here as evidence for notability. DGG ( talk ) 21:01, 15 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Benjamin Jordan

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  Hello, LyndsayNicole. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Benjamin Jordan, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:02, 19 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:Benjamin Jordan

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Hello, LyndsayNicole. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Benjamin Jordan".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 15:31, 21 March 2022 (UTC)Reply