Your submission at Articles for creation: Fred Again (April 16) edit

 
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Fred Again page edit

Hi There,

I'm trying to get a page on Fred (Fred again, Fred Gibson) published but am having quite a bit of trouble.

As suggested I've used Allmusic as a reliable source for many of his song/album cites. Even after these edits it still does not seem to be good enough to get the page published. Is there soemthing I am missing possibly the notability of the mentions?

Here is a link to the page (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Fred_Again)

This is my first-page I'm creating for Wikipedia, so any help is greatly appreciated!

Thank you, Julian