Janakjk21

Your submission at Articles for creation: Gorkhali Takma band (September 17)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Gorkhali Takma band (October 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 08:43, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

@Theroadislong I get it YouTube and Spotify are not reliable, but they are mentioned there for band songs and performances and not as sources. I have mentioned plenty of news articles, magazine mentions, and other blogs and articles as the source for the article. if it may help and the band, i think, is known name in the country of Nepal, it will be appreciated if you view it in context of Nepal rather than numbers Your reply and insights on the topic will be appreciated. Janakjk21 (talk) 14:20, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

The "Musical Style" has one source...Facebook and the tone is not appropriate, the draft sets out to praise the band whereas it should dispassionately report only what the reliable independent sources say and show how they pass WP:NBAND, which isn't at all clear. Theroadislong (talk) 15:36, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

@TheroadislongShould I change the content just to report on what the band is about with the same source? will that work help me out here? This is my first article and it's confusing Janakjk21 (talk) 15:42, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

Wikipedia isn't interested in what Facebook says about them, we need independent sources. Theroadislong (talk) 15:45, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

@Theroadislong Sorry for that but there is just one Facebook reference i mentioned because the news article company that published that article is no more so i found the same article they published on Facebook, so i had it as a reference If that is only the reason, then i will be happy to remove it and resubmit it . (thanks for the feed back ) Janakjk21 (talk) 15:51, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 06:06, 15 June 2024 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Gorkhali Takma

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 05:17, 14 July 2024 (UTC)