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Your submission at Articles for creation

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Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. The submission has not been accepted because it included copyrighted information, which is not permitted on Wikipedia. You are welcome to write an article on the subject, but please do not use copyrighted work.

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Your submission at Articles for creation

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Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

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As reviewing administrator, with long experience with this type of article, I made some detailed comments at the AfC page. I apologize for the rather incomplete help you have been receiving so far, but the true problem with the article is the promotionalism. Wikipedia may not be used to promote a cause, no matter how worthy. The present article is unfixable, and I do not not see how it would be possible to write an acceptable one without much better references providing substantial coverage from 3rd party reliable sources, that are not press releases, or material derived from press releases. I think it is necessary to remind you to review WP:COI, If you continue to try to introduce this radically unacceptable article, you are likely to be blocked as a promotional only editor. DGG ( talk ) 23:16, 1 November 2012 (UTC)Reply