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MoneyLion Comments

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  • Your article is all about what it sells. You tell us nothing in the text about the number of employees (unsourced in the infobox), turnover or profit
  • Crunchbase is never suitable as a ref, and some of your other refs are just quoting the company managers, or are obvious press releases, neither are independent third-party sources. For example, the ref for They also reached five million customers in 2019 is the CEO saying so, hardly an independent source Jimfbleak - talk to me? 12:02, 10 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Jimfbleak: Thanks very much for the feedback. I was trying to align the page to similar Neobanks in the space (Acorns, Varo) but no doubt those pages need additional work too. I've made some changes to the page; included revenue and no. of staff in the infobox. I removed the Crunchbase citation and accept your point on that. Removed the 2019 reference to a one of their key products too. Added in a section for business funding with a citation. If you could let me know if you think we're moving in the right direction that would be much appreciated. Fountainofyouth (talk) 19:11, 10 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
I made these changes, please check. I guess at some stage you'll have to submit it for review and see what reviewers think. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 11:37, 11 November 2020 (UTC)Reply
@Jimfbleak: Thanks again - the changes look good to me. Will get the page submitted for review. Fountainofyouth (talk) 05:06, 16 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

AfC notification: Draft:MoneyLion has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:MoneyLion. Thanks! davidwr/(talk)/(contribs) 15:31, 16 November 2020 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: MoneyLion (December 4)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DGG were:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
DGG ( talk ) 03:02, 4 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:MoneyLion

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 04:01, 6 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your draft article, Draft:MoneyLion

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Hello, Fountainofyouth. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "MoneyLion".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 03:02, 4 June 2021 (UTC)Reply