Ericmcginn

Your submission at Articles for creation: Toyota Motorhomes (February 11)

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SwisterTwister talk 07:36, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Micro Motorhomes (February 11)

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 08:22, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

Hello! Ericmcginn, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! MatthewVanitas (talk) 08:22, 11 February 2017 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Toyota Motorhomes has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Toyota Motorhomes. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 07:11, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission re: Toyota Motorhomes

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YellowJasmineGal (talk) 11:41, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Hi Eric, I saw on Facebook the discussion about there not being a Wikipedia article about Toyota motorhomes. I have been meaning to submit a comprehensive one for quite some time. Thank you for starting the ball rolling. I added a lot more information that I hope is useful -- I hope you don't mind. I have been a Toyota RV enthusiast for over 30 years and am happy to share what I have learned about them. Now let's see if the Wiki team accepts it. I know there will need to be more references added eventually. YellowJasmineGal (talk) 11:41, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Toyota Motorhomes (February 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 15:54, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Well it doesn't look like the new expanded version that I wrote is going to be accepted either. I appears that getting a Toyota Motorhomes Article in not going to be workable anytime soon.

Here is what the reviewer wrote back to me.

ME: I need your help. Please let me know which sections / paragraphs do not need to be improved and that are already OK, thanks. "Toyota Motorhomes" page YellowJasmineGal (talk) 17:32, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Reviewer: I'm afraid that none of the content you have added is acceptable it is unreferenced and inappropriate in tone, Forums and Facebook are not reliable sources either. Theroadislong (talk) 17:41, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

ME: Thank you for clarifying. Please instruct me where and how in the Wiki format this type of useful information is appropriate to post? YellowJasmineGal (talk • contribs) 18:15, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Reviewer: The content would be more suited to a blog or Facebook page. Wikipedia articles require significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic" (see WP:42). Theroadislong (talk) 18:18, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Oh well . . . we tried. YellowJasmineGal (talk) 18:50, 13 February 2017 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Micro Motorhomes

Hello, Ericmcginn. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Micro Motorhomes".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 06:45, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Toyota Motorhomes

Hello, Ericmcginn. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Toyota Motorhomes".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

If your submission has already been deleted by the time you get there, and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Legacypac (talk) 18:34, 17 September 2017 (UTC)