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Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel Blau Gallery (March 7)

Latest comment: 3 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Theroadislong (talk) 17:27, 7 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

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AfC notification: Draft:Daniel Blau Gallery has a new comment

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Daniel Blau Gallery. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 12:21, 8 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel Blau Gallery (May 4)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Hoary was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

"Exhibitions (selected)": Where is the referencing for these? (And is the list necessary at all? And if it is necessary, which I find hard to believe, then it should run from oldest to newest.)

"Publications (selected)": What are these? Are they written by Blau? Are they published by the gallery? Or is this merely a list of publications, with some relationship to Blau or his gallery? Every title is in quotation marks; should we infer that none is an actual book? (By convention, book titles are italicized.)
"Art fairs (selected)": Mostly unsourced. Trivia: Cut the entire list.
"The son of artist Georg Baselitz" source?
"Daniel Blau is known for his exhibitions and publications, including notable volumes on Andy Warhol’s drawings from the 1950s" Who says that they're notable, and where do they say it?
"Mark Rothko’s paintings received their first German gallery exhibitions at Daniel Blau" source?

And the paragraph on oceanic fish hooks has no referencing whatever. --

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Hoary (talk) 03:05, 4 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel Blau Gallery (May 4)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Still very poorly sourced and promotional with unsourced name dropping and puffery like "Blau’s research helped to establish their background and context, in particular the influence and inspiration they drew from the flourishing magazine culture of the time; LIFE Magazine is the source subject for the majority of the drawings." again unsourced, does the editor have a connection to the subject by any chance?

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 14:53, 4 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Daniel Blau Gallery. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 11:19, 10 May 2021 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Daniel Blau Gallery (July 16)

Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Locomotive207 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please remove the inline external links, it also reads a bit like a resume

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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🌀Locomotive207-talk🌀 21:47, 16 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Concern regarding Draft:Daniel Blau Gallery

Latest comment: 2 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Hello, CHFox. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Daniel Blau Gallery, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 22:03, 16 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

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