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Your submission at Articles for creation: Pay As You Go Pension Scheme (April 17)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by WikiDan61 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Notional Defined Contributions (April 18)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
EROS message 11:51, 18 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

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Greetings. Your article is promotional in the sense that it reads as if extracted from a brochure. Read WP:PUFFERY. Many words you use will aggravate the promotional tone of your article. Try to be impartial when choosing words to express your writing. Another reason for being promotional is that on Wikipedia, articles are factual and concrete. You wrote about Benefits and Criticism which are discursive in nature, like an essay. And another thing is that, no one said your article's sources are faulty. It's the advertisement tone and the structure of the article to it is. Anyway, for reliable sourcing, read WP:RS. In essence, cite third party sources: mainstream publications, newspapers, magazines or books. Stay away from homepages and official websites. Sources must provided extensive and in-depth coverage, a whole article that is. If anymore queries persist, I suggest you post questions to the AfC Helpdesk which has many editors who have over 10 years of experience editing on Wikipedia. EROS message 04:26, 24 April 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (May 1)

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Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ToThAc was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.
ToThAc (talk) 18:12, 1 May 2018 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: Notional Defined Contributions has been accepted

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Notional Defined Contributions, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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