Allenchen.sky

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nanjing Publishing House (October 18)

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Theroadislong (talk) 11:26, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello, Allenchen.sky! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 11:26, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for your suggestion, Theroadislong!

But could I know the reason?

The Draft:Nanjing Publishing House can't be accepted because the references is not reliable, right?

So, if I can find the reliable data to cite, it maybe will be accepted?

Or something I need to notice?

Sorry that I just edit Chinese items only before, recently try to edit in English.

Thank you for your reply!

--Allenchen.sky (talk) 12:11, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Could someone help this article be improved? I can not really understand how I can fix it, such as which part has the problem, or maybe some words/sentences is not suitable? or resource is not enough? thank you very much! --Allenchen.sky (talk) 06:05, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Please have a look at WP:NCORP which explains the notability criteria for organizations. If you need help making sense of that, please head over to the IRC helpdesk where we will be happy to explain how these things work. Salimfadhley (talk) 09:12, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nanking Massacre and International Peace Research Institute (October 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tol was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Tol (talk | contribs) @ 14:38, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

@Tol: Thanks for your reviewing!

But could I know how I can fix it?

And I want to know what is the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article?

Because I try to translate the article from Chinese version and the article looks like the formal tone. Allenchen.sky (talk) 05:30, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello! I declined this mainly because of the grammar issues. Some examples include:

• "and it established by" (it was established by?);
• "Morial [sic] Hall ... established in" is missing a verb and seems to be misspelled;
• "Xian-wen, Chang" and "Jian-jun, Chang" have erroneous commas in names;
• The sentence starting with "Including" does not have a predicate (it only has a subject).

Please improve this grammar before submitting it. If you would like me to help with the translation, please let me know; I think I could improve the grammar. Tol (talk | contribs) @ 19:11, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

@Tol: Please help me! My grammar is so weak...

I will try to fix it first, thank you so much! Allenchen.sky (talk) 15:47, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nanjing Smart City, Iot, Big Data Expo (October 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Idoghor Melody was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Comr Melody Idoghor (talk) 19:32, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

@Idoghor Melody: Thanks for your reviewing!

Could I just know the reason is because the reference?

Or something else?

If I find the reliable data to support, maybe this article will be accepted, right? Allenchen.sky (talk) 05:03, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

@Allenchen.sky: Expand the article, add more sources, then submit. Another reviewer will look into it. -- Comr Melody Idoghor (talk) 05:16, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

@Idoghor Melody: Okay, I got it!

If I have problem then I will ask you for help!

Thank you so much! Allenchen.sky (talk) 05:31, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

Could someone help this article be improved? I can not really understand how I can fix it, such as which part has the problem, or maybe some words/sentences is not suitable? or resource is not enough? thank you very much! --Allenchen.sky (talk) 06:04, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

The issue pertains to the sourcing for the article. It's not currently good enough. We need significant coverage in reliable secondary sources to show that a company or organization is notable. Please refer to WP:NCORP. Salimfadhley (talk) 09:09, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

@Salimfadhley: Thank you always help me, thank you a lot! QAQ Allenchen.sky (talk) 07:07, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Belt and Road News Alliance (October 20)

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Comr Melody Idoghor (talk) 19:54, 20 October 2021 (UTC)

@Idoghor Melody: Hello, thank you always for your help!

Your mean is about the published, reliable and secondary sources too few, right?

So if I can find more published, reliable and secondary sources to support, then maybe this article will be pass, am I right? Allenchen.sky (talk) 16:03, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

@Allenchen.sky: Hello and thanks for the ping. You should read and understand {WP:GNG}, it will mostly answer your questions. Add more more content to expand the article and of course more reliable sources. Thanks. 👍Comr Melody Idoghor (talk) 16:27, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

@Idoghor Melody: Thank you so much!

Sorry, my poor English skill, thank you again for help!

I will fix your advice as soon as possible! Allenchen.sky (talk) 16:37, 24 October 2021 (UTC)

Could someone help this article be improved? I can not really understand how I can fix it, such as which part has the problem, or maybe some words/sentences is not suitable? or resource is not enough? thank you very much! --Allenchen.sky (talk) 06:06, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

The problem with this article also seems to be sourcing. Please head over to the IRC Helpdesk and we can explain some of these concepts. --Salimfadhley (talk) 09:14, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

@Salimfadhley:

Actually, I went to the IRC room a few times, but maybe this article's source is all Chinese( and my English is not very well...), so the helpers could not feedback more detail information.

I will try to search more data to add in the article.

Thank you for your help! Allenchen.sky (talk) 09:26, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

The draft only has two sources, both of which are in Chinese. This will make it much harder to have your page reviewed. Consider adding the "trans-title" field to your citations so that editors who only read English will understand what is meant by each source. Salimfadhley (talk) 11:08, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Feel free to return to IRC. I am usually there during UK hours. Salimfadhley (talk) 11:09, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

@Salimfadhley: Okay, thank you for your help and advice, I will try to add "trans-title" (maybe your mean is a template, right?) in the article.

Hope I can be at the UK time meet you and get your help, I appreciate that! Allenchen.sky (talk) 16:02, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Trans-title is just one field in the Cite template. Salimfadhley (talk) 17:28, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

@Salimfadhley: Excuse me, so your mean is that I have other template need to add in the draft article, right? Or something else?

Thank you so much! Allenchen.sky (talk) 06:17, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

trans-title is just an optional field in the citation template. If you are using the visual editor it's a hidden field by default, but you can just search for it when you are filling in the fields. Salimfadhley (talk) 10:14, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nanking Massacre and International Peace Research Institute (October 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Greenman were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Greenman (talk) 21:12, 25 October 2021 (UTC)

@Greenman: Excuse me, so this article can't be accepted because the sources and the tone, right?

Could you help me point the problem content?

I can't find the which sentence of tone is not suitable.

Thanks for your comment! Allenchen.sky (talk) 06:27, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi, I've looked at the draft, it's currently not much more than a single paragraph with a set of random facts. It's not structured in the way we might expect from an encyclopaedia article. There's no introduction, no sections. It's hard for a reader looking at this article to get an impression of the purpose and history of the organisation.

Before asking this kind of question again, please familiarize yourself with the Manual of Style which describes the typical structure of a Wikipedia article.

Creating a new article is hard. It's a difficult writing challenge even for experienced editors. It can be really daunting for new editors because there's a lot you just have to know. Please feel free to ask more questions. Salimfadhley (talk) 09:08, 27 October 2021 (UTC)

@Salimfadhley: Okay, thank you so much! I got your mean! Allenchen.sky (talk) 07:00, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: BRAIN BAY INTERNATIONAL TALENT COMMUNITY (October 28)

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Theroadislong (talk) 16:52, 28 October 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jinling Friendship Award (October 31)

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Theroadislong (talk) 10:13, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

@Theroadislong: Thank you so much!

I will add more data for this articles, thanks a lot! Allenchen.sky (talk) 08:23, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rooting and Visiting Plan (October 31)

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Hatchens (talk) 10:55, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

@Hatchens:Thank you so much!

I will add more data for this articles, thanks a lot! Allenchen.sky (talk) 08:24, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: International forum on cultural placemaking & the night-time economy in world cities (October 31)

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Slywriter (talk) 19:30, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

@Slywriter: Excuse me, could I know which sentence did read like AD?

Because I think just a general statement.

Thanks for your help! Allenchen.sky (talk) 08:19, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

The event is in the near future and the article reads as promoting the event. I don't see any chance for notability before it happens and a low chance sufficient Independent sources will discuss the event to make it meet notability after it occurs. Slywriter (talk) 13:03, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

@Slywriter: ok, I will try to fix it as soon as possible, thank you so much! Allenchen.sky (talk) 15:23, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Future Network Development Conference (November 1)

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_signed, Iflaq ^(talk) 13:57, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

@Iflaq: Thank you so much!

I will add more data for this articles, thanks a lot! Allenchen.sky (talk) 08:23, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: World Intelligent Manufacturing Conference (November 2)

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Slywriter (talk) 23:03, 2 November 2021 (UTC)

@Slywriter: Thank you so much!

But the references all from the news website, is it still not notability?

Or I need to add some scholar? Allenchen.sky (talk) 08:22, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

All of the articles cited appear to be reprints of press releases not in-depth coverage of the event. I dont see any indication the event is notable. See if other sources discuss the event and its impact. Slywriter (talk) 12:59, 3 November 2021 (UTC)

@Slywriter: thanks for your explain, I finally got your mean! Thank you so much! Allenchen.sky (talk) 15:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nanjing Smart City, Iot, Big Data Expo (November 16)

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Calliopejen1 (talk) 20:04, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

@Calliopejen1： Thank you for your advice!

But Could I know that your meaning is the topic is not really clear, right?--Allenchen.sky (talk) 09:24, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

I mean that it is not clear that the topic qualifies for a Wikipedia article. (Frankly, I doubt that it qualifies.) I understand what the topic is, but you need to provide better sources showing high-quality independent coverage of the event. Calliopejen1 (talk) 18:10, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

@Calliopejen1: Okay, I got it, thank you for your explain!--Allenchen.sky (talk) 07:28, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: BRAIN BAY INTERNATIONAL TALENT COMMUNITY (November 17)

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JBW (talk) 11:55, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

@JBW: Excuse me, actually I fixed some content not all the same content, maybe just fixed too less, thank you for your advice.--Allenchen.sky (talk) 12:04, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

OK, here are a few comments and pieces of advice which I hope may be helpful to you.

• In the draft I mentioned above you made some changes, but you made no changes at all to the references in the article, which, as you will see if you re-read the message about it further up this page, was the reason for the rejection. Indeed, that message explicitly said "Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added".
• I see that you have created several drafts which have been rejected. I imagine that must be very discouraging and frustrating, after you have clearly put quite a bit of effort into writing them. My advice to new editors is that it is best to start by making small improvements to existing articles, rather than creating new articles. That way any mistakes you make will be small ones, and you won't have the discouraging experience of repeatedly seeing hours of work deleted. Gradually, you will get to learn how Wikipedia works, and after a while you will know enough about what is acceptable to be able to write whole new articles without fear that they will be deleted. Over the years I have found that editors who start by making small changes to existing articles and work up from there have a far better chance of having a successful time here than those who jump right into creating new articles from the start.
• The problems mentioned above are ones which can be corrected by gaining more experience of editing Wikipedia, but I'm afraid there's also another problem which can't be cured so easily. Your skill at English is not really up to the level which is appropriate for writing articles in an English language encyclopaedia. I have made a few changes to the text of Draft:International forum on cultural placemaking & the night-time economy in world cities to make the English more natural, but I have not changed the sentence "Besides, the night-time economy will bring the impact and development", because I am really not sure what it is intended to mean. Some pats of other drafts you have created are, I'm afraid, similarly difficult to follow. JBW (talk) 14:03, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

  @JBW: Thank you so much!

  Sorry for the inconvenience, yes, my English is poor, so I can't write down the suitable statement for all the articles,

  but I have a question is, if I just fix the article, and not yet to resubmit, will any helpers can give me the comments?

  I am afraid of that, so I think if I fixed the content then I need to resubmit it soon.

  Thanks for helping fix the Draft:International forum on cultural placemaking & the night-time economy in world cities, I really need it, thank you again!

  --Allenchen.sky (talk) 07:24, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

You can try asking for help at the "Teahouse" (there's a link to it in a message near the top of the page) or at Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk. You may manage to get help. On the whole I think you are more likely to get general advice than the kind of help with details that you need, but you may like to try. JBW (talk) 09:08, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Rooting and Visiting Plan (December 2)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: World Intelligent Manufacturing Conference (December 6)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jinling Friendship Award (December 6)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Belt and Road News Alliance (January 6)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Global Video Media Forum (January 18)

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– robertsky (talk) 02:03, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: World Intelligent Manufacturing Conference (January 30)

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– robertsky (talk) 09:57, 30 January 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Future Network Development Conference (February 19)

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– robertsky (talk) 18:31, 19 February 2022 (UTC)

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