2601:19D:303:E570:58F9:B83E:56A7:B91B

Your submission at Articles for creation: Duke Tour (March 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sam-2727 was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Sam-2727 (talk) 01:26, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Hello, 2601:19D:303:E570:58F9:B83E:56A7:B91B! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Sam-2727 (talk) 01:26, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Duke Tour (March 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Duke Tour and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Duke Tour, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
• If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Sulfurboy (talk) 02:57, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Duke Tour (March 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

• If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Duke Tour and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
• If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Duke Tour, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
• If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
• If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Sulfurboy (talk) 02:57, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Duke Tour

Hi. You wanted some feedback on your duke tour article, so here it is. Essentially, your article is a decent article all around how it is. The only (very important) thing that needs to be improved is that you need more secondary sources, so the sources don't have as much of a connection to the group. I recommend you search news articles or perhaps reviews in newspapers. Add a couple of these and you will have sufficient sourcing and the article should be accepted. But see also the comment indicating that you should bring this up at the talk page of Duke (album). Let me know if I can give more specific advice. Sam-2727 (talk) 13:47, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Duke Tour

Hello, 2601:19D:303:E570:58F9:B83E:56A7:B91B. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Duke Tour".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 04:59, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

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